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July 30, 2012, 4:42 pm

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The Hellephant

DNA can be a funny thing.  Flip a gene here and the resulting offspring is sterile.  Twist this one around and the kid winds up twice as big as either parent.  And this one?  Lets just say that there’s a reason why some genetic experimentation is very, very illegal. 

In the early 21st century, the mass extinctions were just getting underway.  Widespread habitat destruction, coupled with high concentrations of aluminum and mercury in the air and water from humanity’s early attempts at weather control, decimated amphibian populations everywhere.  The pollinators and birds came next.  Our short-term answer was to gather samples of all the remaining species possible (and some of the extinct ones, too), and put ‘em all together in one place until we could learn how to undo our stupid mistakes.

Unfortunately, the resource wars started before we got the chance.

China didn’t give any warning -- just dropped several neutron bombs throughout America’s heartland and stormed up through Mexico.  The DNA-cache happened to be near ground-zero, in the basement of a university science lab along with hundreds of other interesting chemicals.  Let’s just say that the place wasn’t exactly up to earthquake code.  As far as we can tell, the blastwave knocked everything around real good, shattering hundred of vials of DNA samples and biochemical research into one big, organic soup.  The radiation took care of the rest.

What rose from the ruined city several years later would have given Godzilla a bad day.  Standing 40 meters high and weighing in at over 6000 tonnes -- roughly 10 times the size of a large African elephant -- the Hellephant went on to claim the breadbasket of the Americas as its territory, and there wasn’t a damned thing anyone could do about it.

At least the Chinese never were able to capitalize on their investment.

The Hellephant resembles a bull elephant, except that it has three trunks instead of one, (with serrated teeth lining their insides).  It sports the ridged shell of an alligator snapping turtle, the horn and bone plating of an armadillo and one gigantic scorpion’s tail.  It also kept its tusks.  The beast is short-tempered, impatient, highly territorial and mean as a saltwater crocodile.  Bad news all over.

It’s also damned near impossible to kill, due to its regenerative capabilities.  If you actually manage to puncture its defenses, the plating begins to heal over in a matter of minutes, forming a barnacle at the site of the wound to cover it and provide additional protection.  Once the skin underneath has finished healing, the barnacle will just drop off.  And that’s where things get interesting.

Hellephant Offspring

If a discarded barnacle is left alone for about a month, it will hatch into a baby hellephant.  Babies have a variable number of trunks (1-6), though the turtle shell and armadillo plating is always present.  They don’t get the scorpion tail until they reach mating age (the better to stab each other with), and never grow much larger than a regular elephant.  Additionally, each baby hellephant receives a random special from the following list:

  • Camouflage (like the chameleon)
  • The ability to shoot spider webbing from one of its trunks
  • Heightened senses (heat-sense, hearing, etc)
  • Claws on the forepaws
  • Spectacular jumping ability
  • Sentience ( ~ 1% )

Some human communities have managed to tame the babies and use them as a sort of perimeter defense/cavalry.  Having a baby or two around also makes a site less likely to come under attack by the original Hellephant, which is handy.

Health and Diet

The Hellephant and its offspring will eat just about anything -- plant matter, dead bodies and garbage are all broken down within minutes by its serrated trunks  In fact, a hellephant can stick one of its trunks into a pile of “food” and chew/swallow the whole mass from within.  This is not a very pleasant way to die.

Being born of extreme genetic mutation, however, hellephant offspring do come with a variety of interesting health concerns.  Some will sport vestigal body parts -- stunted arms, wings, heads, etc. -- that can rot away if not cared for.  The Hellephant itself is amazingly hardy and no estimates have yet been made for its natural lifespan.


A tiny percentage of hellephant offspring are born with extreme intelligence, and that mysterious gift of self-awareness.  The few that have survived adolescence have banded together for protection, developing a rather reclusive community somewhere near the ruins of old Chicago.  The sentience seems to breed true, however, and they could become a major player in the area within the next century.

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Voted caesar193
July 30, 2012, 22:52
Nice work. Do the babies eventually grow into the huge version? And if they do, how do the communities that raised them deal with the full grown monstrosity? Do they kill it off before it grows too powerful? All in all, pretty good.
July 31, 2012, 16:14
The babies never get to be much bigger than a normal elephant. I said as much, but it's kinda buried in there. Controlling them is still an art, however -- you've got to find some way to control that tail once it sprouts. I imagine that some communities just cut the tail off entirely, while others find a way to bind it. Very few have mastered the art of riding the a hellephant into actual combat, but its still pretty early in the timeline.
Voted Moonlake
July 31, 2012, 2:28
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Voted Cheka Man
July 31, 2012, 7:40
A fearsome creature indeed.
Voted Scrasamax
July 31, 2012, 9:56
Freaking Awesome
Voted Kassy
August 2, 2012, 8:04
Scras couldn't have put it any better!

This may find a way into my game, if ever I get around to having one set in modern day, post rescource war America.

4.0/5 and my favourite quest submission so far :)
Voted Strolen
August 5, 2012, 8:21
Loved the origins!! Leaves it wide open for tons of creations.
August 12, 2012, 19:46
Terrifying. And I love the name.

I have a hard time envisaging an elephant with three trunks, but perhaps that's part of the appeal.

A good giant and a nice kaiju.
August 13, 2012, 12:18
Thanks! The three trunks was to give it a sort of "Cthuluphant" vibe, if that helps you picture it any better.
Voted Murometz
September 20, 2012, 13:01
A worthy Behemoth! Great visual. Nice touches on the origin and its hellebabies!
Voted axlerowes
October 8, 2012, 21:57
I too like the way it reproduces.
But something that ravages an already ravaged wasteland really does not carry the same threat of destruction as something that comes out to disrupt the hubris of peace and prosperity. The real story would start when the hellebabies make land fall in Sweden or some other country that sat out the war. I like the idea, but this doesn't seem to be the whole story.
Voted valadaar
May 7, 2013, 20:54
I like this. "Cthuluphant" - love it!



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