"You find yourself in a vast temple filled with terrifying carvings."
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Decent, deserves to be expanded upon. The art remembers me of Ancient Indian temples, the martyred aspect has a Christian vibe.
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Our Lady of Endless Suffering, I think this is fantastic, and very easily misunderstood.
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Some countries might ban it.
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I think this a perfect jump for a religion. I am also impressed that you added bit of mystery in even such a sparse post. We get one impression, then another and then a 3rd all in 100 words. Well done.
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Very nice idea! Quite believable and, as axlerowes pointed out, we get everything we need to know in 100 words.
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Very nice, and slightly 'deeper' than it seems at first. Great example of the power of a few words! After reading the second sentence I'm hooked and my 'sense-of-wonder gland' tingles.
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perfict,fills me w/ ideas,will prob steal for new campaign 5/5
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