New SubmissionsRing of Cold Embers
An onyx ring that has a glowing ruby in the center.
History Passed down through the generations in a french witches coven, this ring originally dates back to the days of the inquisition. Forged by the witch Rhea Sylvia, to help hide witches from the tortures of the time. It’s current owner is a young girl named Mathilda Cotton.
Magic Properties - The ring can only be worn by women, it allows its wearer to become invisible to those that seek to harm her, but only if she stays silent and does not try to draw attention. If even a peep is muttered the glamour will fade.
Its command word is "Tenebrious Est".
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2009-03-10 06:02 PM
There is a spark of something that can be quite good here. Short pieces are not a bad thing, but they still need to cover some basic information.
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P.S Will hold my vote on this one in case you decide to add more to it.
2009-03-11 01:14 AM
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2009-03-12 10:35 AM
I have to agree with both Mike and Manfred. This really needs a lot more to it.
2009-03-13 08:14 AM
What about warlocks (or whatever name you care to use for male witches)? What is it about being female that sparks the magic of the ring? Is it that all females are supposedly witches at heart? ;)
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