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September 3, 2004, 9:29 pm
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October 29, 2005, 2:49 pm


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Doomsday Item
By: Sentinel*

Made thousands of years ago by the Dark Sorcerer, Raynor, he imbued all his power and might, worshipping the evil gods to put…

Made Thousands of years ago by the dark sorcerer, Raynor, he imbued all his power and might into the necklace, then worshipping the evil gods to do the same. Some of them did, thinking a way to gain to rule the universerses. The necklace became powerful beyond anyones imagination, and poeple yearned to have it. Raynor planning on giving it to his ally, Slagar, he sailed across the sea planning to give it to him as a weapon against his enemies. But it never did. A storm raged out of nowhere and the ship along with the necklace sunk to the crushing depths of the Black Sea. Some say it was by the neutral God of Sea that sensing the evil had brought the ship down, some say it was the powerful Sky Gods who were wanting the Evil Gods to have no adventage. Few people think it was just mere chance

Magical Properties:

It enhances every quality of the body, agility, strength, magic, sight, and instincts. But is cursed as well, the necklace has a will of it’s own and wishes not to be used, so it destroys the bearer slowly over time and takes control over the physical body



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Scrasamax
2004-09-03 09:42 PM
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Reminds me of a certain ring forged by an evil sorcerer that was also lost in the water.

2/5
Agar
2004-09-03 10:12 PM
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You gave it 2/5? What?

Grammar errors, the freagmented intro, for example. Power overwhelming, but you don't get to use it. It destroys the PC and turns them into an unstoppable NPC.

The back story is "Bad wizard wants all power, dies in shipwreck!" Film at 11?

So...............

1/5
CaptainPenguin
2004-09-04 01:17 AM
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1/5.
Scrasamax
2004-09-04 06:46 AM
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*sigh*

Okay, it does deserve a 1/5 but I felt generous at the moment. One would think that since multiple gods of evil enfolded their power into the ring...erm...necklace, that they would have had the foresight and ability to see to its safe bearing. The one ring wasnt lost until it was taken by the good guys, who lost it. Also, how does one enfold power? I am thinking Sentinel might have meant invest or imbue.

Plus it was an oversight on my part that the necklace was lost to the crushing depths of the black sea. So somewhere there is a deep sea crab invested with the power of the dark gods bent on undersea domination because the necklace drifted down and landed on in.
Dozus
2006-05-24 07:17 PM
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That crab is quite possibly the best idea for an NPC villain I've ever heard ever.
MoonHunter
2004-09-04 10:47 AM
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Too little detail. Too little explanation. Too cliche. Oh and the grammer and spelling needs work. Sentinal, could you please make sure to proofread and edit your work before you submit it?
Sentinel*
2004-09-04 11:03 AM
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I know, it came to mind and I had no paper so I just clicked it all down, it's very, very crappy, but I will work on it
EchoMirage
2004-09-06 05:47 AM
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One thing to bore them all, one thing to chase them away
from the table of the GM they will by ennui be led astray.

Ack.
Sentinel*
2004-09-06 12:16 PM
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lol
MoonHunter
2004-09-07 09:26 AM
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ROFL re: EchoMirage

Sentinel...If you have an idea for a post, but not enough time to finish it or do it right, then you can either PM yourself with the idea or put it in a thread like this one...
http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=1438&start=15

Then you can tinker with it, get some feedback, and finish it properly before you post it.
Sentinel*
2004-09-07 06:11 PM
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okay
Voted Ria Hawk
2006-06-13 06:37 PM
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Also, why did this uber powerful dark sorcerer, upon successfully petitioning his dark gods to make an already massively powerful artifact even moreso... decide to give it to someone else? Why not keep it for himself? And why does the necklace NOT want to be used? The problem with sentient artifacts of unspeakable evil is usually the other way round...

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