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The Oracle Of Ein

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The Oracle of Ein (pronounced un) is a relic devoted to the sole idol of faith remaining on the world of Kalimon after Elementallion, a major catastrophe.

The Oracle of Ein is a crystalline pedestal of scintillating colours topped with the holy symbol of Ein- a single image simultaneously depicting the three facets of Ein (butterfly, bat or hourglass). It is a relic from times before the Elementallion. Prophecies sprouted from the Oracle always contain one random element from each of Ein’s three facets: deception or the existing order (the butterfly); truth or change (the bat) and time (the hourglass).



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Moonlake
May 2, 2013, 3:54
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Update: Just trying to kill two birds with one stone here-it's a very short sub for the Religion and Cults quest but then it belongs under the Short and Sweet challenge with 75 word count. Also, a companion stub to this sub on the Elementallion is coming up.
Strolen
May 2, 2013, 12:14
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Should throw the 100 word challenge freetext on it to identify it as such so it gets the proper review.
Moonlake
May 2, 2013, 19:05
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This was really meant for Muro's Short and Sweet which has an even shorter word count but I see what you mean so I've added the freetext now.
Voted Forganthus
May 2, 2013, 17:38
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I really like the imagery of a bat contrasted with the butterfly. Is the hourglass sideways, by any chance?
Moonlake
May 2, 2013, 19:04
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Yes, the hourglass is sideways. I'm not sure whether this comes thru clearly in the sub (I was operating with a 75 word limit) but it is really one of these optical illusion images (you know, young girl versus a hag) where you can interpret it as a butterfly, a bat or a sideways hourglass.
Voted Strolen
May 6, 2013, 12:01
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A decent quick one.
Voted Dossta
May 6, 2013, 12:06
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As a 100-word (or fewer) submission, it does its job fairly well. I know you can't do much to clarify within the word count limit, but perhaps adding a few ideas to the bottom would help. Mostly, I'd like to see a few sample prophecies that could "sprout" from this thing.
valadaar
May 28, 2013, 10:50
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Actually, I think it would be possible to compress this further and recover about 10 words. You mention the 3 aspects twice, and I think with a bit of wordsmithing, you could have eliminated the duplication :)
Voted valadaar
May 28, 2013, 10:50
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