Melee Weapons
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January 20, 2007, 6:04 am

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gentleman's killers


2 rings, 1 for each hand and a pocket watch

(still in work so. . .)

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2 rings, 1 for each hand and a pocket watch, all items inconspicous but deadly, as the pocket watch, when swung on the chain reveals a round blade blade and the rings when tapped together reveal 5 inch dagger blades, perfect for assassins.

they were created by an ancient human blacksmith for the king of his home town, and were put in a treasure cache for his ancestors. but it was found by an assassin and used in assassinations

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Voted Scrasamax
April 18, 2006, 16:48
No story, barely an item, and the grammar was horrible.

round blade blade?

I know this review is harsh, and I want to say something constructive, something to encourage you to try again, or to even redo this submission. I dont know what to say along those lines other than dont give up!
April 18, 2006, 17:41
Since you still have this "in the works" you should edit it- changing the "regular submission" pull down to In work. If you don't do it today, someone will do it for your tommorow.
April 18, 2006, 21:00
I don't understand the pocketwatch part... Aren't they supposed to be ancient?
May 2, 2006, 13:58
Instead of a pocket watch perhaps use a brooch or an amulet instead?

Why was this item created for a King of all people? King of Assassins then? Does the blade pop out of the ring or does it produce a dagger that is held and can be dropped?

I like the concept of the watch, if it was changed to another item that is, but the rest is very bland.


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