A Noble Rest
For those who enjoy comfort and discretion, and don't mind paying a few extra coins
during their stay in Ak-Var.
Set in one of the quietest streets in a gentle neighbourhood, The Noble's Rest is run by
Max and Julia Crow, a childless middle aged couple who love nothing more than to
provide a home away from home for 'the better class of guest'.
The Hostelry's ten single and ten double rooms are decorated with simple good taste,
and the proprietors keep a discreet but firm grip on any loud or unruly behaviour. Their
doorkeeper is a huge, burly mute from Marisport known only as Carly, who is very
particular about keeping the rowdy elements from bothering the hostelry's guests.
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? Responses (8)
What a score of 3 says.
I'm just going to assume that Carly, is a guy. With makeup. And if anyone mentions it, he will floor them.
It's a place to stay - and seems like little else. Even though I know it's a 100 word sub it seems to be very much lacking in uniqueness - It can be used by GM's, sure, but it's nothing they couldn't conjure up on the fly in a half a minute anyway. Sorry Kassy, this one doesn't do it for me :(
It's ok. I had been using the 100 Word Challenge to get me back into writing. But now I have 2 full subs up and the juice is flowing again...
Update: Submission was lost to the void. Re-uploaded 29/03/14 EDIT: Cannot change Hook and Type for some bizarre reason. Would appreciate Moderator help.
too generic
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commenting challange