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September 16, 2012, 9:09 am

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Takamoto's Dogs


Ingo Takamoto was first a foremost a dog lover, but was also a brilliant geneticist 

For years, man looked at his closest companion and was at a loss. Ten thousand years of domestication and evolution and while the Dog had far outstripped it's lupine cousin, it was no closer to true communication then than it was before it was domesticated. How many loving and caring dog owners have longed to just speak with their beloved pet? To communicate in a clear and intelligent fashion?

Takamoto Genetics and Augmentation, Inc

Traded under the TGAI, Takamoto is best known as a boutique genetics company. Where the larger companies will do massive projects such as Neko Augmentation processes for thousands or tens of thousands, or diabetic screenings for millions, TGAI does work for clients who might number in the dozens. Takamoto is best known for it's patented Uplift Process which uses a combination of artificial brain components, specifically an artificial frontal lobe, and genetic code tinkering to produce a super smart dog. The end result is a dog that is able to speak, in a rough fashion, as well as having basic problem solving skills, thoughts and opinions, and the other accouterments of sentience.


There has always been a cloud of controversy around Takamotos canines. The animals are unique creatures, each a deliberate creation. While a great deal of effort was put into the process of human cloning, no such effort was put into the acclamation and habilitation of the new canine psyche. They are artificial and they know it. Legally, a Takamoto Canine is intelligent, but afforded no legal rights, no legal protections. At the end of the day, they are afforded the same legal status as a sofa. If a Takamoto dog is killed, mutilated, tortured, neglected, and so on, the only crime commited is Cruelty to Animals. 

Creating an abomination like a Takamoto Dog is cruelty to animals. Any process that starts with butchering the brain and adding toaster parts to it is evil.

Typical stance of Anti-Uplifter

The Dogs

Takamoto's uplifted dogs have human level intelligence. The brightest match human average, while the majority fall into the 9-12 year old range for mental ability. They are able so speak one language at a basic level, and have all of the normal abilities of a dog. Their personalities are far different from human, as they are predominantly a scent based creature rather than sight based. And much like children, they are direct and to the point. 

Starting Characters

A Takamoto Dog could be used a PC (Scooby Do, Astro, etc) with the following additions and modifications

Physical stats, such as strength, hit points, etc, would not change as an aspect of the Uplift Process. 

Determine mental traits as usual, but Intelligence cannot be higher than human average (9/18 for D&D, 2/5 for WoD) 

Perception attributes benefit from better hearing and better sense of smell, but visual perception is given a minor penalty. If merits and flaws are being used: Keen Hearing, Keen Nose, Colorblind

Basic abilities are severely limited by the fact that the dog does not have manipulative appendages other than it's mouth so it cannot talk and manipulate an object at the same time. 

Other general suggested merits and flaws: selective diet, vulnerable to hacking, loyalty (to specific person), Short, uneducated, easily distracted.

Each Takamoto dog needs to have some psychological issues, such as phobias, stress or neurotic triggers, or something of that variety. They were created first and foremost from a point of 'just because we can' and are sold in a commercial consumer economy. This can be as simple as cowardice or anxiety about being alone, or can be as serious as atavistic behavior, excess aggression, or effects that resemble PTSD.

A Few Notes

The talking dog is a common sight in cartoons, but with the advances in technology, creating a talking intelligent dog is not an insurmountable task. Compared to cloning humans, or creating artificial life in a machine, its relatively easy. But this doesn't mean it's right, or ethical. The Takamoto Dog is alone in the world, intelligent but unable to speak clearly or easily, unable to use clever monkey hands. It can see other dogs, and it knows that it is different. While most of the time, the dog in question can be quite happy and appear to be well adjusted, there need to be times when the facade is pulled away and the cruelty is brought to the surface.

Plot Hooks

Those Meddling Kids! - A local investigation group has a Takamoto great dane that serves as a team mascot, as well as being a trained search as rescue dog. The dog is loyal to a fault, but is constantly hungry, and is easily startled and has fear control issues. When he loses a self control check, he has to run away and hide as quickly as possible.

Cujo - Rabies isn't gone, and while great efforts were made to stamp out cancer and diabetes, not nearly as much attention was paid to many animal diseases. The neighborhood Takamoto comes home with his family, but while on vacation in the country was infected with the deadly disease. Mayhem ensues as the dog, it's mind rapidly deteriorating starts freaking out, attacking and killing people. 

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Voted Strolen
September 16, 2012, 13:33
Voted axlerowes
September 16, 2012, 14:25
the details about the world, company names-bits psuedo-history, add a sense of flair and style which I like, hinting at the much larger world. But it barely scratches the surface of its subject. Could you have done this in 100 words? If you wanted to do approach this a piece of creative writing, as opposed to a served up idea to contribute to other peoples creative efforts, could you have placed some narrative structure to it? Or perhaps presented a thesis and then presented the arguments for an against it?

On a sillier note: your only examples were scooby and astro, seriously? You left James Thurber and Jack London off the table? Even in the realm of speculative fiction, you belittle us all to think that Scooby or Astro would be the only frame of reference suitable to the Citadel.

here are three others

Our even the futurama episode with the smart monkey.

September 16, 2012, 15:18
It was a random idea, and I thought of delving into Lassie or Rin Tin Tin but the only inspiration for this was Astro and Scooby. Plus this was written in one sitting, after waking up with an upset gut from too much Taco Bell. If you would like to add to it, there is an Add an Idea button, and I would like to see what you could do with the idea.
September 17, 2012, 18:40
Is there such a thing as too little Taco Bell?
Voted valadaar
September 18, 2012, 12:54
I like this idea and would like to see some more bones on this on. I think it has potential to become the seed for a 30.


Jimmie is a war-dog, employed mainly for sniffing out IDEs and the like. With the greater capabilities of being a Takamoto dog, he does more then simply finding the devices. His collar is outfitted with tracking devices and a small explosive charge. This charge detaches allowing him to position it with his mouth. A video feed with two-way communication is provided to allow him to access both his handlers, and secure databases for tactical/disarming data.

Jimmie has seen too much, even for a dog. He has had blood on his fangs and has been nearly killed by an IDE that was trigged by his electronics. He survived that encounter due to poorly crafted explosives. He has a strong taste for alcohol, but cannot hold his liquor very well, which has caused some serious problems in the past.
Voted Murometz
September 30, 2014, 20:14
First talking dog I thought of was Brian.

This is great. How much more info do you need? I particularly enjoyed reading the typical anti-uplifter stance.

These things scare me. And soon, they could be a reality.

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Hooper McFin's Two Shot Portal

       By: dudeington

Now, this ol' ramblin fellow tends to walk his talk a bit too far down the train sometimes.. So I'll be brief in my recantin' of how it was my Tavern "came to bein'" on the multiverse as a weave of it's own spell.. And how I'm even alive to tell the story!

You see it's simple really, trust me.. that's my specialty, keepin it elementary. And you can trust this old Bard.

Anyway, this one night these wizards get a ramblin' on about the temporal exististance of space and time and how it could be manifested in a weave of super dimensional space. whereupon the folded space would give rise to an infinite number of entrances and exits to one or many spaces. Now, seein' how my talkin' sometimes get's locked into the way us folks used to talk back in the ol' west. These wizards didn't know I was a master of the word. and I had heard everything they said. They were also a bit over the wagon, while I was steerin' the show.

So that's how it came to pass, I struck a bargain with the wizards. They come to me in the morning and conjure up their idea into reality and I'd pledge them my life, my existance.. in essence my soul. but in a much nicer sense of the word. So they came by in the morning a half remembering our talks the prior evenin'. And I recanted their words verbatum, and that's how it came to be. The spell was complete that afternoon. My tavern would be the super dimensional cube that would exist in this weave of space and time, folks could come and go as they please, knowin in mind some of the rules and limitations set forth.

A few of 'em as follows.

No feller can be causin a ruckus inside any of my fine establishments, as always rule number one god damnit.

n' second the portal works kinda tricky. When ya outside ya cast the spell and lend your will to luck a bit and regardless the doors to the bar will appear, the windows a luminescent amber.. you can hear the chattee but ya can't see in. And the catch is the door might be locked, in which case you chalk it up to lady luck and go walk off and try again in an hour. Now most times the door pops right open and from the outside you always come in the front door, immediately greeted by myself or one of our many fine patrons of Hooper McFin's Ale & Steakhouse.

Now when ya cast the spell from inside the Tavern, another catch comes up. The back door is mainly a secret for the non-initiated staff and the regulars but for sake of the prose let's assume we all know there's a secret door in the back with a portal there. Now when you go on through this one, you got two scenario's you oughta be aware of. One is ya pop outside relative to the same spot you came out. The other is, you walk back on into this one or another of our many Hooper McFin's Ale & Steakhouse.

so it's a clever quantum railroad I got my tavern and my people's caught on. But, Hey the show's sure as always goin. ohhh' rutin tootin skidoodle -

** And that's it.. that's the only notes I found on the spell, apparently out there somewhere is a Tavern caught on the mighty ebb and flow of the multiverse. Well. at least I can put to rest my torment as to the condition now referred to as "Hooper McFin's Teleportation Paranoia".

Dr. Clarke T. Mulligan - Professional researcher of Time & Space.

Hooper McFin's Ale & Steakhouse

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