Ranfral
Ranfral is the proud son of King Althuar of Conqaz. He is in a difficult position. When his father is stricken ill by orc poison and is on his death bed, Ranfral has a choice. Ascend the throne or find the legendary staff of Leviadan to heal his father. The problem is if he ascends the throne, he will not be permitted to encounter his peasant love Ladrave. His choice is simple, his quest begins.
Special Equipment:
Ranfral wears a large heavy cloak to hide his royal identity. He carries a large broadsword made of mithril silver and pure gold. He knows not what magic it carries but he knows that this family heirloom was used to fight and defeat the darkness 3 ages before.
Appearance:
Ranfral has dark long hair. A slight grizzle of a goatee on his chin. He is fair in the face and greatly ressembles his father. He was trained in the arts of the high kings as a swordsman.
Background:
His castle is found in the great city of Alwenlass, near the woods of Azem. Ranfral yearns to find more in life. He fears to become king for his love in the peasant Lardave
wood be destroyed. Then, one night a host of orcs attacked them. The men of Alwenlass defeated the enemy but the King Althuar has been poisoned. Ranfral must find the enchanter's island wich has the Staff of Leviadan hidden somewhere on it, it's power alone can heal his father's illness. With the help of Erkana the unicorn and Hathil, Wellfur and Dawmith, Ranfral searches in desperation before his father's death occurs.
Roleplaying Notes:
When using this caracter, go to the woods of Haléfas first to be able to recruit Hathil and his Rangers, proceed then through the world of Hamset.(Hamset is not yet completed, it might take sme time before it is ready for roleplaying pleasure.)
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? Responses (8)
Thank you miss Hawk, the peasant is named Joseph. A corrupted soul aidding the orcish king to get the staff first. In his mind the death of the king means thhat the land will be weakened. When the black king Vlame(Orcish king) attacks the country of Conqaz, Joseph wil be granted kingship and the love of Ranfral as his prize.
I love sending royalty out into the world!
I think the poisoning of the father line needs strengthening though.
What poison were the orcs using?
Where did they get it?
Stuff along that line.
Could develop into a good villian behind the scenes if set up well and ensure that it makes more sense why behing poisoned by orcs requires an epic quest. Might be a quest to find out what poison was used in the first place by capturing the person behind the orcs...etc.
Poison of their own make, kind of like our equivilent of aids threw a dagger, though it will do more than defeat the immunitary system.
How did this ever get such a high rating? I think it is vague, needs more detail and more background, and is generally just not gonna cut it.
2/5.
Maybe the poison used was of a mystical kind, that no healer could get rid off
Sounds like the plot of a Young Adult fantasy novel. It can be used, with a bit of work.
this is a good plot hook