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The Shade of You

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Freetext Friday "Shadow"

In the darkness you pass

pass through night and Moon

We were moths to our own flame

Leaving the Shade of You

You stalk

You haunt

You hunt

alway looking

looking for the moths and the flame

I see only the Shade of You

I left as well as for dead

I left like a childhood toy

Still you return

out of the corner of my eye

all that remains is the Shade of You



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Voted Mourngrymn
March 27, 2016, 22:02
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I am only voting because I'm not sure why I wouldn't. And I somehow find that I like this. It has given me an idea for a short side plotline in my story. A visceral idea of an oracle or wayward traveler speaking to a party member on a darkened rainy road.
Aramax
March 28, 2016, 8:03
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I'm glad you were inspired! My inspiration for my recent poetry writing was the newish Adele song Hello, which brought home some sins of my past........
Voted Scrasamax
April 3, 2016, 7:05
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Dragonlordmax
April 22, 2016, 21:54
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Not a bad bit of petty. I like the, uh, I think "cadence" is the word I'm looking for.

From an RPG idea perspective, I don't get too much out of it, thouh.
Dragonlordmax
April 22, 2016, 21:54
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That should say "poetry", not "petty." Sorry.
Voted Cheka Man
January 27, 2017, 21:18
Only voted

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