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August 26, 2012, 8:52 pm

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Divine One Chrysani


"What a pretty place momma." "Yes it was made by the Divine One Chrysani as she died."

Commoners in the Goddess Forest

Chrysani is actually dead. She is the first and only one of two Divine Ones to have died. Her death is an event that would later and forever be known as the Godfall.

When the world was made Chrysani created the forests, plains, jungles, and all plant life. She is said to be the one who taught humans how to farm and live off the land. It is also said that before her death the power over the sun was her's, but afterwards Kolou took that power.

In life she was tall and lithe. Her eyes changed with the color of the leaves and her hair was brown. She glew green and had an aura of calm. Anywhere she went people would instantly become calm and more cheerful. She was always calm and kind. Her favorite places were gardens and farms. She disliked people who abused nature, such as cutting down more tree than necessary, but did not hate them and tried to help them as Kolou does.

After around 500 years of mankind's existence she found a man who loved plants more than any she had seen. She disguised herself as a human and began to spend a lot of time with him. Eventually she fell in love with him and eventually the two wed. The other eight Divine Ones knew, but no humans ever learned that a man known as Jaron had a Divine One for a wife and neither did he. Each decade she stayed on the Earth her power waned. After 50 years she became mortal and her only power left was that she was great at gardening and tending crops. Not long after that she died of old age and her corpse radiated waves of green energy.

For 50 miles, in the area where she died, there mystical forest that cannot be cut down and is ever regenerating. Food is always plentiful there and it is always calm. People that enter there find that they lose any and all desire to fight. The area is known as the Goddess Forest and is a sacred place. People often go there to escape life in the surrealness of the forest.

After the Godfall Hizeel went down to Earth and told humans the truth. He also told them that the Divine Ones would no longer visit for prolonged periods of time but they would always watch over them. He gave the order as leader that the other Divine Ones were not to spend any longer than 5 years on Earth. He also stated that they should be careful with their power while on Earth as Chrysani used her powers often.

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Voted Scrasamax
August 27, 2012, 8:31
I like the idea that the longer amount of time a divine one/god spends on the mortal plane their power is weakened. Would the inverse be true, if a mortal were to spend long enough in the divine realm would they increase in power until they were divine ones themselves?
August 27, 2012, 14:07
Hmm. I actually hadn't thought of that inverse idea. That's quite intersting. Though a mortal would first have to find some way to get to the Gods' plane.
November 6, 2013, 13:13
An interesting location. One could theorize that Gods outside of the heavens no longer derive power from the faith of their worshippers, causing them to fade.

Voted valadaar
November 6, 2013, 13:13
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Hooper McFin's Two Shot Portal

       By: dudeington

Now, this ol' ramblin fellow tends to walk his talk a bit too far down the train sometimes.. So I'll be brief in my recantin' of how it was my Tavern "came to bein'" on the multiverse as a weave of it's own spell.. And how I'm even alive to tell the story!

You see it's simple really, trust me.. that's my specialty, keepin it elementary. And you can trust this old Bard.

Anyway, this one night these wizards get a ramblin' on about the temporal exististance of space and time and how it could be manifested in a weave of super dimensional space. whereupon the folded space would give rise to an infinite number of entrances and exits to one or many spaces. Now, seein' how my talkin' sometimes get's locked into the way us folks used to talk back in the ol' west. These wizards didn't know I was a master of the word. and I had heard everything they said. They were also a bit over the wagon, while I was steerin' the show.

So that's how it came to pass, I struck a bargain with the wizards. They come to me in the morning and conjure up their idea into reality and I'd pledge them my life, my existance.. in essence my soul. but in a much nicer sense of the word. So they came by in the morning a half remembering our talks the prior evenin'. And I recanted their words verbatum, and that's how it came to be. The spell was complete that afternoon. My tavern would be the super dimensional cube that would exist in this weave of space and time, folks could come and go as they please, knowin in mind some of the rules and limitations set forth.

A few of 'em as follows.

No feller can be causin a ruckus inside any of my fine establishments, as always rule number one god damnit.

n' second the portal works kinda tricky. When ya outside ya cast the spell and lend your will to luck a bit and regardless the doors to the bar will appear, the windows a luminescent amber.. you can hear the chattee but ya can't see in. And the catch is the door might be locked, in which case you chalk it up to lady luck and go walk off and try again in an hour. Now most times the door pops right open and from the outside you always come in the front door, immediately greeted by myself or one of our many fine patrons of Hooper McFin's Ale & Steakhouse.

Now when ya cast the spell from inside the Tavern, another catch comes up. The back door is mainly a secret for the non-initiated staff and the regulars but for sake of the prose let's assume we all know there's a secret door in the back with a portal there. Now when you go on through this one, you got two scenario's you oughta be aware of. One is ya pop outside relative to the same spot you came out. The other is, you walk back on into this one or another of our many Hooper McFin's Ale & Steakhouse.

so it's a clever quantum railroad I got my tavern and my people's caught on. But, Hey the show's sure as always goin. ohhh' rutin tootin skidoodle -

** And that's it.. that's the only notes I found on the spell, apparently out there somewhere is a Tavern caught on the mighty ebb and flow of the multiverse. Well. at least I can put to rest my torment as to the condition now referred to as "Hooper McFin's Teleportation Paranoia".

Dr. Clarke T. Mulligan - Professional researcher of Time & Space.

Hooper McFin's Ale & Steakhouse

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