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April 5, 2006, 5:18 am

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Vinet Magos


A very powerful mage ready to help out anyone in need. She’s very smart so you should usually listen to what she says.She is mainly a specilist in the element of water and a little in the element of air.She takes the ring of fire so she can use the element that she doesn’t know much about as an advantage to learn more about it. She uses a quarter staff as her weapon and she only wears a light robe.

Special Equipment:

The ring of Fire, Mana orb, Marek’s Bear Skin.


Has long black hair, and beautiful eyes. She is very beautiful and anyone with low wisdom will do anything for her. She is very polite and is of the middle upper class.


Vinet grew up in a big home with her mother who was a great mage. one day when her mother left to go get some magical items she never returned. Now at the age of 20 she searches for her mother and for the person who kidnapped her. She doesn’t let this get in her way of her adventures though and she never holds her party back.Her mother told her that she should always choose an element that shes interested in and she should never fear it’s opposite element.

Roleplaying Notes:

is at about level 7 - 14.She can be used in hard or easy plots but if it;s to hard than she might die.She is not very good in physical combat because of her low strength and HP but she is great with magic. What if her and her friends found the guy/girl that kidnapped her mother? what would she do? how would she react?

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Barbarian Horde
May 22, 2003, 5:42
...wears only a light robe, and a great bearskin big enough for most warriors of any stature.

Excellent. A super-powered mage with one unique item and two artifacts, one of them (just by the way) giving unlimited magical powers.

... no weaknesses, no dark spots, no controversy, or do I see wrong?
May 22, 2003, 17:52
Thank you, anonymous.
Just what I was going to say. Your characters seem very one-dimensional because they have no defects.

Don't get discouraged, though. I didn't have that great a start, either.

By the way, you didn't have to say 'her mother' ever time, you could've just said 'she': "one day when her mother left to go get some magical items her mother never returned. Now at the age of 20 she searches for her mother and for the person who kidnapped her."
Yuna Holystone
May 22, 2003, 19:00
I'll change it.
Yuna Holystone
May 22, 2003, 19:13
Now she kind of has a weakness(physical combat.)
May 22, 2003, 19:54
Kay. Like I said, don't get discouraged. Just go with it.
(For more info on the topic of not getting discouraged, see the plot entitled "Desert of Death".)
Barbarian Horde
May 23, 2003, 5:22
Still, not bad. Maybe you could write about how she got those powerful artifacts, or why she is so high-level while still 20? Adventures? Parents? Mysterious old gentlemen rewarding her this way for a minor help?
Voted Drackler
April 4, 2006, 18:53
Really my only problem with her is detail.
Voted Kassy
May 30, 2014, 10:25

Could use a little more fleshing out.
Voted valadaar
April 18, 2016, 11:33
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