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October 13, 2012, 6:58 am

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Cheka Man
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Cheka Man
May 27, 2009, 9:32
Has a really evil person of this Faith ever been exwecuted and then buried instead of cremated for his/her crimes? (thus wiping out their soul as well as their living body.)
Cheka Man
May 27, 2009, 9:33
Has a really evil person of this Faith ever been exwecuted and then buried instead of cremated for his/her crimes? (thus wiping out their soul as well as their living body.)
May 27, 2009, 13:12
Oooo ... now that's a nasty punishment. I like the idea, and yes, I can see it happening.
May 27, 2009, 17:41
Update: Bleh, forgot the "What do they think of?" section. Here 'tis.
Cheka Man
May 27, 2009, 20:26
Why does your shield have -0 on it?
Voted Strolen
May 27, 2009, 22:46
Only voted
May 28, 2009, 0:10
Update: Restoring summary
May 28, 2009, 0:33
Superb. Beautifully rendered mythos with a staggering amount of juicy detail! (More thoughts when I'm less exhausted). Welcome to the Citadel!
Voted Cheka Man
May 28, 2009, 14:56
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Voted Nafar
May 25, 2011, 18:34


just... whoa

Voted Silveressa
July 13, 2011, 21:20


It seem GC ate my previous commentary, so let me try this again:

An exhaustive amount of information and very in depth plot that is quite memorable; I particularly like the link backs in the intro to other subs, it makes for a convenient reference for the reader. 

However I do find the amount of depth  here to be a little rigid and difficult to easily work into an already established campaign setting without it feeling like it was shoehorned in somewhat.

Adding in an additional section with plot hooks and adventure concepts, as well as some suggestions on how to include this faith/legend into an existing fantasy world would complete the piece for me, and give it that last bit of "ready to use" feeling it seems to lack for me.

Voted Kassy
June 17, 2012, 7:19
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