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This started off as a great post, but after reading for a while the neighbourhood seemed... monodimensional.
Why would the neigbourhood riot against a whorehouse, when they got slavery orphanages, opium dens and disease ridden priesthoods in there? You should think fornication would be the least of their problems?
Other than that glaring logical flaw, well, I loved most of this sub. It shows great, great promise, but it was a bit monodimensional, a bit short and it did have that faulty logic.
You're making the fatal presumption that public morality is logical. There are plenty of places in the world today where indentures and drug dens are legal or tolerated, but openly incestuous prostitutes sure wouldn't be.
Maybe you should add a few decent businesses, to even out these 'hallmarks' - otherwise there is not much to do, except torching the whole area. :)
But this dark corner has something likeable... some of the locals may not be more than suspicious, while others are out in the open, tolerated to different degrees. I'd also wager the disease priests are the only ones to smile regularly at their customers.
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February 23, 2010, 12:28
Why would the neigbourhood riot against a whorehouse, when they got slavery orphanages, opium dens and disease ridden priesthoods in there? You should think fornication would be the least of their problems?
Other than that glaring logical flaw, well, I loved most of this sub. It shows great, great promise, but it was a bit monodimensional, a bit short and it did have that faulty logic.
4/5
July 17, 2010, 9:10
February 24, 2010, 4:14
But this dark corner has something likeable... some of the locals may not be more than suspicious, while others are out in the open, tolerated to different degrees. I'd also wager the disease priests are the only ones to smile regularly at their customers.
March 1, 2010, 23:56
Blocks sailing to a harbor-location near you...
I'm a sucker for these types of "shops". They never get boring.