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May 21, 2009, 17:55
May 21, 2009, 18:29
May 21, 2009, 18:39
Summary is a little long winded - I think it is a run on sentence. Also, there are a couple of typos that a spellcheck can remove.
Kudos for the linkage on the first post!
May 21, 2009, 19:19
As far as interior description, well ... talking about the interior of the common room of a tavern is something like describing the interior of a McDonalds' - seen one, seen most of them. Plain wooden benches, plain wooden plank floor, plain wooden tables, smoky beams, smoky hardwood walls; it's nothing unusual.