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September 22, 2007, 3:28 am

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Evil Camels in Space


Spitting in a vacuum.

The Tonrgum Shaman, Guruk Fisov of Gaapsu and his six bactrian camels usually made their pilgrimage south and west from Ulan Bator, capital of Mongolia, to the Gobi desert and the desolate Ömnögovi Province and Züüngar, once a year.

There, alone in the denuded wastes, Guruk Fisov enacted his tribal rituals and searched for that which his great grandfather had always claimed existed, while his camels would graze and drink the snow to maintain their fluid levels.

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February 15, 2012, 21:40

You had me with the teaser

March 13, 2016, 15:58
still got me

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"Under the Hill"

       By: rickster

Some parallel worlds have different time-flows, like the fabled dwelling-places of the elves: those who visit them under the hill for a night return to find that years have passed in this world. Perhaps it is the gate leading between the worlds which causes the alteration. If a gate were 'misaligned', the shift from '| |' to '| \' or '| /' as it were would lead to that difference, much as a light-beam split and bent by a prism ends up taking a longer path. There might even be a mathematical function linking degree of misalignment to alteration of time-rate.

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