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Cathedral of the Black Dagger
By: RGTraynor

Symbol of the faith of Ratri, goddess of the night, in the Old City of Warwik City, the Cathedral of the Black Dagger holds more than an ancient, mysterious tomb - it holds fanaticism in its grasp.

The temple is fashioned of black basalt, and is unadorned on the exterior, the only relief being cunningly fitted diamond-shaped patterns of darker and lighter shades of stone.  The main entrance - a peaked obsidian arch - is flanked by large willow trees, giving an appearance of twilight even during bright days.  Two Black Dagger Knights flank the arch at all times.

Gardens: A separate iron gate leads to the temple garden.  Climbing roses nearly cover the trellis they twine about, and deep green ivy thickly covers the flanking side of the temple and the surrounding brick wall.  Exotic ferns are mixed with beautiful deep hued flowers of many varieties.  Here and there, the dark colors of the flowers are broken up with splashes of snowy white iris.  Brightly colored butterflies flit about, adding their charm to the scene, and a stone walled koi pond sits in one corner.  There are benches where parishioners and visitors may sit.  A modest cemetery for parishioners is nearby, but the preference for many is cremation, with the ashes scattered over the garden; a memorial plinth lists names of those so interred.

Foyer:  Silver-veined black marble floors and ebonwood walls give an impression of night, with tiny silver stars embroidered to the black velvet hung ceiling to complete the effect.  An intricately worked silk tapestry hangs on one wall, bordered by iron candelabra, and a plaque hangs on the other, saying in three languages: "The night comes softly with Her velvet cloak, wrapping me in warm embrace.  In Her arms, my visions come.  With star-filled eyes She holds me tight, filling my mind with dreams, till She fades away, departing with the last moonbeam."

Sanctuary:  Curved walls of polished ebonwood support a large dome ceiling.  Thick black cushions are scattered across the floor, surrounding the altar and the lightstone - there are no pews - and a small curtained niche to the south offers privacy for personal prayer.  Black lambswool carpets cover the floor, cushioning every footfall and muting most sounds, creating a sense of suspended time and reality.  Incense permeates the air with its fragrance of night-blooming jasmine and musk, while its small wisps of smoke dance in sensual abandon.  A Black Dagger Order guard is always present.

Aumbrie: This room is set off from the sanctuary by a black velvet curtain.  The walls of this small room are draped with black velvet and silver spidersilk.  Dozens of votive candles are scattered about the room on the basalt floor, forming a vague circle around a central marble platform.  On the platform rests a crystal coffin in which lies a young woman rests in what appears to be sleep.  Ebony hair surrounds her pale face, her exquisite beauty apparent even though she lies motionless.  There is nothing signifying who she might be.  A Black Dagger Order guard is always present, vowed to silence, and will prevent people from approaching the coffin more closely than a foot, violently if need be.  (Rumor has it, which the Church will neither confirm nor deny, that the woman in the coffin is Aditra the Liberator herself, the great hero-saint of fifteen centuries ago.)

This temple, slightly incongruous in the Mariners’ Quarter, is older than the city - it has been documented as being over 1700 years old - and is the personal parish of Lady Lela Melisseni, the elven Wielder of the Black Dagger, chief of the Order.  While Lady Lela is not resident here, the unofficial rector is Lady Vylene val Linix, the Commandant of the Dagger, the Orders second in command.  Lady Vylene is the image of soft womanhood (and looks far younger than she actually is) and affects a sensual image that conceals a razor mind, indomitable will and serpent-quick fighting reflexes.  Three other priests and eight acolytes are resident, and there will seldom be fewer than a dozen Black Dagger knights and postulants on hand, living under the temple. Available spells to co-religionists include healing, divination, darkness, plant and animal magics.

The Order of the Black Dagger is the ecclesiastical fighting order of the faith of Ratri, goddess of Night and fertility, whose great basilica is likewise in Warwik City.  In the woman-dominated religion of Ratri, almost all the Black Dagger Knights are female, trained to theology and arms from an early age.  On duty, they wear black-washed chainmail and unrelieved black cloaks and garments, and the pressure for black is so strong that few women who are not brunettes seem to be admitted to the Order.



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Voted Cheka Man

2009-05-22 11:56 AM
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Interesting, a female knightly order.
 
RGTraynor

2009-05-22 12:23 PM
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Well ... one of the very few general criticisms I have of this site is that too few of the entries go beyond traditional sex roles - for example, almost all of the prostitution/brothel entries involve female courtesans serving male clients.

As it happens, over the decades a full third of my players have been women, and it's been at least 50-50 in my two groups for the last several years, so I make a deliberate effort to spread out the demographics, both in terms of gender and ethnically.
Scrasamax

2009-05-22 09:02 PM
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The main reason behind that is that men are the primary employers of prostitutes. While there are certainly women who enjoy the sevices of male prostitutes, there are not enough of them to support male brothels. I have had a large number of female gamers in my groups as well.
 
RGTraynor

2009-05-22 09:29 PM
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By that same token, the overwhelming number of rulers, warriors, guildmasters and indeed pretty much everyone in a position of power or authority in history have been men. In a genuinely egalitarian world, I fancy there wouldn't be the same stigma attached or the automatic presumption (among many others) that men are the only ones who want no-frills, no-fuss sex.
Voted manfred

2009-05-22 05:04 PM
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Besides women in black, I like the general concept, too. It is a good place with a few surprises. What do these women fight for?
 
RGTraynor

2009-05-22 06:23 PM
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I've writeups of my world's religions, and at the least the Manannan and Ratri writeups are likely to be pertinent. They're on my list to post.
Voted Scrasamax

2009-05-22 09:03 PM
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A nice submission, very atmospheric and i want to use the term Ironic-Neo-Gothic with the presence of women in traditional male roles, the heavy and dark architecture and the overwhelming presence of the color black being set off by the colors of the garden.
 RGTraynor

2009-05-23 09:36 AM
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Mm, sorry, this new look just screwed with the layout, and I'm getting that "you are not authorized to use freetext" when I try to edit and save.
Strolen

2009-05-23 12:35 PM
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Update: Played with the formatting a little. Let me know via PM or bug report in forum if you continue to have issues.
 RGTraynor

2009-05-25 04:51 AM
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Update: There, updated the formatting following Strolen's kind aid.
Voted OmegaDraco

2012-02-08 12:49 PM
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I love the visuals. It's difficult to get a sense of scale though. My first thoughts were big, but I toned it down after seeing the number of residents.

Is the cathedral open to the public? I can't foresee many guests, but it seems like a great deal of the cathedral was designed to impress.

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