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Balthazar Langdon

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"Langdon, Major, 72630"

*Thwack!* "Where are the others!?"

"Langdon, Maj.." - *Thwack!*

Note: This submission will contain links to submissions that aren't ready yet. So if something is not explained fully/in enough depth there will probably be a link for it that will be updated and finished at a later date.

The reason I'm uploading these now is so that I have a copy of everything online. I will update as I go. Please hold from commenting until the submission is finished.

Major Balthazar Langdon.

A giant of a man, standing tall at 6'1" and built like a brick shithouse. His face dominated by scars, a particularly nasty one adorning his left cheek. Serving as a constant reminder of his failure in Afghanistan.

His hair is kept short, almost completely shaved for practical reasons. People fight dirty, if you can avoid giving them an opportunity, do so. The eyes are what unnerve most people, friends as well as foes. They are a clear radiant blue, almost sparkling.

Usually dressed in his officers uniform, and green beret. At his side he carries the standard issue Beretta M9.

Early life.

Born in 1982 to parents; Albert and Stacey Langdon, a bricklayer and a seamstress. Balthazar grew up in Jamestown, North Dakota. Life wasn't always easy but he'd managed. Somehow.



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Kassy
February 28, 2013, 5:47
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Changing this to "Request Advice". It's been sitting there for ages and I'm not quite sure what I should be doing with it.
Murometz
March 15, 2013, 12:29
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Not sure how to help,without knowing what else you're looking to do with him...So far, he just "is".
Kassy
April 15, 2013, 7:01
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Whatever you want.

I've lost sight of were this was meant to be going. If you have any ideas, anything you fancy doing, then please PM me and maybe we can necro this.
Forganthus
May 8, 2013, 11:41
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What is the little bit of flavor text at the beginning?

I say give him a gun and a list of names. Or Love in the Time of PTSD. Give him absolutely horrific traffic accident. Take away an arm. Give him a mortgage and a house full of garbage.

Or.

Give him redemption in a sundress and a bonnet. Give him a peace on a long, solo fishing trip where he camps on a island and something unbelievable happens. Let him stop a crime in progress, to win back his honor. Let a child teach him something.
Forganthus
May 8, 2013, 11:44
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Second reading: Captured, interrogated, eventually gave up information after beatings? Expectation of hair pulling = distrust of people, warzone morals?
Kassy
May 11, 2013, 6:39
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Your second reading was right. Eventually he'll have given up the pre-agreed upon story, when he feels that he can no longer hold on. This pre-agreed upon story being more plausible, but still not the truth.

Perhaps him coming home, having served for 9, possibly 10, years. His struggle with life on civvy street, diagnosis with PTSD.

I can't remember where I was going with this one. Perhaps with a few more ideas he can be rescued and made into a proper sub.
Murometz
May 15, 2013, 14:13
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Still no idea how to help. he's a big, strong guy with scars, who served in Afghanistan. No clue what to add, sorry. I guess Forganthus' notes after his second reading sound good. :-)


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