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November 18, 2012, 2:14 pm

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The Greater Adventuring Kharmic Line of Mysantia


100 word challange

The 4th dimensional being representing the material plane manifests 'anti-bodies" in the form of the Kharmic line.The Kharmic line is tasked with the defense of the material plane and it's favorites, Mankind. They are the adventurers of lore.

When the adventures first meet, they feel for the first time in their lives that they belong.No matter how diverse the group, they have found their true family.They will now live and die battling the forces that would harm the plane and it's agenda.

The Line comes back together when separated and have memories of their past selves..

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November 18, 2012, 14:12
It all started as an explanation of how the players get together and grew from there.
November 18, 2012, 15:05
Hm. Well, the concept seems interesting. But as a 100, I just don't get it. It begs for more background and explanation, or some examples. My suggestion is to take it out of the 100 and give some more thorough explanation. As is, I just don't know what to make of it.
November 18, 2012, 21:56
Nope you aint gettin nuthun else,Im going to 100 word the S*** out of this place!
Voted Dozus
November 19, 2012, 10:43
Fair enough.
Voted Rune
November 19, 2012, 15:43
Interesting iteration of an "eternal champions" idea, in that it is and has been their destiny to adventure and do what they do across multiple lifetimes. I'd also like to hear more about this. A dimension considered to be a living being as a whole? Antibody characters? Nifty start. 

I'm with Dozus, give us more. You, sir, have been outvoted!
Voted valadaar
June 17, 2013, 7:45
100 word challenges, done correctly, need to be very careful in their word choice to provide sufficient detail in the words provided. This is more of a teaser.
Voted Moonlake
January 16, 2015, 20:32
I agree with Val that this is more of a teaser but personally don't really mind the lack of further details.


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