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August 23, 2007, 5:41 am

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He is the chief ranger of Haléfas, otherwise known as the white wood.  With his ranger patrole of seasoned fighters:Vaxtar, Wellfur and Dawmith, they defend their home from the evils that lurk all around.

Special Equipment:

He carries twin hiltless swords that are slightly curved at their tips.  Also he carries a Haléfas bow with a quiver of arrows.


His hair is blond and long.  He is fair in the face and wheres a forest green hooded cloak. He is supicious of all that pass through Haléfas.  Once befriended he can be boastful yet very wise at times.  He is a very strong fighter and believes in sltealth.


He was born in the HAléfas capital of Ellivanor.  There he was raised and trained as a ranger.  He quickly became advanced in his class.  His huntsmenship, twohanded sword fighting ability and his sharpness with the bow make his abilities rival those of the most skilled elf anywhere and he was only seven.  Now at the age of 23 he patroles his forest home and defends it with his troop. Though he does not know it, his patroling days near their end for he will be an important nay, primary piece in the War against evil Vlame.  He knows not the magic in his swords, his father did and he knew that he would accomplish great things. 

Roleplaying Notes:

Hathil is in great need to see the world and fight the darkness that threatens all.  He is loyal and would likely leed his band into the darkest of fate if it was to win war.  He is not fond of men or dwarves for he has slain many of both.  As well as orcs and other horrors.  But first let me educate you about Haléfas.  Far of in a world knows as Hamset, there is a wood, 2000 acres of strange forest inhabited only by elves.  Here, by holy magic of the elfking known as Valanair has blessed this wood so that the trees glow white.  undaunting, unswaying.  To keep the evils away.  This but a piece of my writing, I have just completed a book wich should be available to you if I can get it published, should any of you know a publisher, it would greatly please me if you can help me contact him.  It would be a good first step in a career as an author.

Sincerely, E.w Klassen

He’s only available in Haléfas and wields elphinar and derisinel.  The magic swords.

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October 23, 2003, 18:13

I don't find anything particularly special about it, but it is well written. Try more detail with your next character, yeah?
July 1, 2004, 11:38
How did this become a 4 out of 5? I rated it a 2!
Voted manfred
August 23, 2007, 5:44
Cleaning up the post of stray special characters, I'm afraid it is not very remarkable. Perhaps someone will find usefulness in it.

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       By: Ancient Gamer

The journey had been a long one and now they had entered the mountains. After an entire day spent on paths cut into the mountainside and through moss covered coniferous woods, they encounter a desperate young mountain tribal. He is searching for his beloved wife and his elder brother, both of whom he got separated from after an unsuccessful attempt to kill a cave bear. The last thing he saw was the cave bear in full pursuit of his wife. He could not help her as he had been knocked to the ground by the raging beast, and was struggling to regain full consciousness. The tribal will be clearly nervous and urges them to look for his wife during their travels. He will stay in his village a couple of miles to the north and pleads for assistance should they recover his wife, whether she be dead or alive.

On the next day of travel, they will journey upon a dim track in the forest and while they are preparing to ascend another path cut into the mountainside, they hear moans of lust from somewhere nearby. Upon closer inspection they will spy a young tribal woman in the heat of the act with an elder tribal male. They are consummating their forbidden love on the cold mountain moss, and beside them lay the skinned and slaughtered carcass of a huge bear.

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