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August 23, 2007, 2:54 pm

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Telgard, The Worshipping Ones


On his own, a Telgard demon worships the concept of individuum - to be solitary, resourceful, and hardy.

They survive in the wilds, maintaining some contact with civilization, but mostly staying alone. They are not the greatest fighters among demonkind, but keeping one’s wits, withstanding blows and giving no quarter still belongs to a strong individual.

Being not easy to impress, it is a certain sign of prestige for a demon lord to attract one. Working for someone, they are most useful as hunters and spies. Plus, no one can compliment better than a Telgard, who would literally worship his master and the concept of a servant, comforting his lord and aiding in all ways possible. The work contract, however, contains a non-working clause for their mating season.


When their mating season begins, the demons put aside their worship of the individual, and start to worship the concept of family. They join in groups of three and together embark on a hunt that will ensure them progeny. While hunting, over the course of three nights they catch a man, a woman, and child. From their bones and a substance secreted after devouring them, they create together a new Telgard.

During this period, their normal demonic abilities are combined, and sharing them, they will help each other out as a family should. Combat with one will be much more harder - they even recover three times faster, and can focus their strength into one. It is suggested therefore to fight the whole ‘family’ at once, rather than pick one empowered by it.

Curiously, while in this group they cannot harm a family that keeps tightly together.

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Voted Scrasamax
December 14, 2006, 13:28
An interesting idea, but it feels very rushed.
December 14, 2006, 14:42
This is a side product of seeing way too much Buffy the Vampire Slayer, it should have been a Stub. Though ideas to expand it are more than welcome!
December 15, 2006, 22:33
Instead of a vote, I will try to think of some ideas to add me'thinks.

I do like the premise! (but never watched Buffy)

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Ringworld-based game , anyone

       By: Kawaresksenjajok

hey im new to this site but was here years ago w/ another name. anyways dont remember so im newbie by default.
Firstly, I am a sci-fi reader and I hope to meet success with my writing.
My favorite series of books are Larry Nivens RINGWORLD tetralogy (Ringworld, RingWorld Engineers, The RingWorld Throne, and RingWorlds Children)
For those that havnt read the ring world is the greatest artificial structere ever discovered.
A ring, its circumference equal to earths orbit, it is built around a sol-like star. Shadow squares halfway betwwn the ring and the sun provide 15 hours of night in a thirty hour day. 70 days equals one falan (one full rotation of ring world. The inner surface-the one exposed to the sun, is terraformed and is one millionkmwide cntrifugal force provides gravity, and rim walls 1000km high keep the atmosphere in. Population of RNH(ringworld native hominids)
estimated in the trillions.
The origins of who built it and why are too sticky to get into. But the ringworld , millions of years ago, was populated bt A race called Pak Protectors. Protectors are ancestors of all homo sapiens. they populated ringworld with homo erectus, but left no predators in the ecology. hence, hominids evolved into every ecological niche. (Vampires, Carrion Eaters, Giant Herbivores, Small Carnivores, some built great technologies and went interstellar. Oh, and ringworld is 300 million times the surface area of earth. post if youre interested, Ill elabortae on native species and alien vistors

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