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The Eolian Reel
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Dozus's comment on 2007-04-21 09:55 PM
The Eolian Reel
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Murometz's comment on 2007-04-20 10:48 PM
It works! You get the what, when, how, and why, and even the after effects. Herein lies a legend and a challenge for a bard PC!

And since so many citadellians deride endless epics ;) well, here you go!

+.5 for challenge format. Go to Comment
The Eolian Reel
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valadaar's comment on 2007-04-22 11:24 AM
Not bad.. :) Go to Comment
The Eolian Reel
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-04-20 08:27 PM
The challenge I was given was to produce a complete submission, using 75 words or less. It comes to 75 words, not counting the summary or title. Go to Comment
The Eolian Reel
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Eclipse's comment on 2007-04-22 10:43 AM
Short sweet and to the point Go to Comment
The Eolian Reel
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Moonlake's comment on 2015-02-22 12:08 AM
Short and sweet, need I say more? Go to Comment
Cuneiform Island
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Maggot's comment on 2007-04-21 12:37 AM
A god's punishment is as ironic as it is cruel. Go to Comment
Cuneiform Island
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-04-16 06:43 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cuneiform Island
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valadaar's comment on 2007-04-16 07:17 PM
Classic! There is a moral here - I know it. Now to find it. Where is that bloody slab?

Given how mad I get when I lose something, this would drive me mad far sooner then poor Fulminus! Go to Comment
Cuneiform Island
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-04-20 08:39 PM
Don't you hate it when you spend what seems like forever looking for something, and it turns out it was where you left it all along? Go to Comment
Cuneiform Island
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Eclipse's comment on 2007-04-26 02:57 PM
Madman + Gods amuesment = genius Go to Comment
Cuneiform Island
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Corinth's comment on 2007-04-20 12:17 PM
Holarus: Hey, have you found that tablet yet?
Fulminus: Yes, but I'm still looking! Go to Comment
Cuneiform Island
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Kuseru Satsujin's comment on 2008-03-11 07:56 PM
My only comments would be some general advice. I recommend specifying what type of stone the tablets are made of to give the submission more flavor. Also, aside from replenishing water, it may be useful to explain why ship's would put in to this island, and how often they do so (for instance, the island could be on the the path of a major trade route). Go to Comment
The Consort of Uncle Jehan
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manfred's comment on 2007-04-08 01:59 PM
Well, it was not precisely written that it was Death, only a spirit that came to claim them... so maybe it was something else. :)


Oh, and I like the group! Go to Comment
The Consort of Uncle Jehan
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2007-07-02 01:54 AM
Nicely done. I like the fact that they were given more time to play their music, until the music didn't make them happy any more. This actually fits nicely with a particular world outlook I favor; music has power. Sometimes a lot of power, if the players are good enough. Go to Comment
The Consort of Uncle Jehan
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-04-09 03:52 PM
Poignant and sad in it's own way. Mysteries are what keep people coming back for more, no exploded diagrams and point by point dissections. Go to Comment
The Consort of Uncle Jehan
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-04-08 01:10 PM
So they live because they made Death happy with their music? Go to Comment
The Consort of Uncle Jehan
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Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-07 11:06 PM
Okay, I really do love this. Go to Comment
The Consort of Uncle Jehan
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Murometz's comment on 2007-04-10 06:01 PM
Nicely done Wulf! An evocative tale, and an interesting group of performers. The song brings back quite a few bar jukebox memories for me too!


Another "yes" vote, on keeping mysteries, mysteries btw. Go to Comment
The Consort of Uncle Jehan
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valadaar's comment on 2007-04-08 08:51 AM
Yes, I like this as well. Nicely done! Go to Comment
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       By: Strolen

People that live in cities no longer have any contact with the gods. There was a pact between the gods, humans, and animals. We could talk to the gods and the trees were the witness' to the pact. When the trees started getting cut down to make cities the pact was broken by the destruction of the witness'. So now only those that live with nature can speak to the gods and/or animals. Some trees grow tall creating darkness that scares men and they are not able to go near them. If they could they could again speak to the gods.

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