Oh, i dont think this needs much advice at all. I really like this. Flavorful, bucolic, rife with verisimilitude. The activities and traditions are quite enjoyable, cant decide whether i like the handfasting or rememberance more!
welcome Stephie! Great first post. I think its ready for the masses! Unless of course, you want to add even more wonderful detail.
Certain trees have sap that is filled with magical potential. Their sap is harvested and distilled down to produce various types of potions, much like maple syrup is collected in some areas. The magical effects of these syrupy potions are often fairly trivial; perhaps they simply cause the imbiber to grow hair more quickly, summon butterflies, or walk a few inches above the floor. People enjoy the syrup as a flavoring, instead of imbibing it for its magical powers.