Oh, i dont think this needs much advice at all. I really like this. Flavorful, bucolic, rife with verisimilitude. The activities and traditions are quite enjoyable, cant decide whether i like the handfasting or rememberance more!
welcome Stephie! Great first post. I think its ready for the masses! Unless of course, you want to add even more wonderful detail.
The PCs are stuck in a town with a strict peace policy, the tiniest scuffle can land you years in prison. The town also happens to be a tourist haven, so inn-prices have skyrocketed. The only way the PCs can rest is if they splurge on a room, with their enemy.