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Johann's Cloth
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Maggot's comment on 2005-10-12 03:35 AM
A nice,useable item. 3/5 Go to Comment
Johann's Cloth
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-10-11 07:19 PM
Usefull. Not wonderful but I like it. Go to Comment
Johann's Cloth
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-12-18 07:47 PM
Not much to say, good solid idea with a little extra. Go to Comment
Johann's Cloth
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-10-13 09:29 AM
A nice useable little item and not too powerful

Also believable - I can easily imagine such a thing being developed, either deliberately or accidentally

Good, solid word Pariah - 4/5 Go to Comment
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Sigurd's comment on 2005-10-23 03:14 AM
Smacks of realism. I like it.

Long may the burlap wave! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-02-17 11:56 PM
This is a devious little item. Subtle, but it makes perfect sense. I'll steal it for my own purposes. Nice quirk with the moonlight. I like it! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2015-04-02 09:38 AM
This is nifty! The unreproducible creation process is handy. Go to Comment
Maganti Blades
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-10-03 12:12 AM
Other than adding an extra line between paragraphs, a very good post. Perhaps you won't be a pariah after all. Go to Comment
Maganti Blades
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-04 04:16 PM
The page did not accept my vote earlier Go to Comment
Maganti Blades
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Maggot's comment on 2005-10-03 12:04 AM
A deadly weapon with a dangerous drawback. Good work. Go to Comment
Maganti Blades
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-10-02 09:41 PM
Short but very good-but the assassin does not want to carry these blades for long without using them-there is only a certain amount of time that they can be carried.Once drawn they must be used at once.-1 because it was such a short entry. Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-12-18 07:48 PM
Good one. Go to Comment
Maganti Blades
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Wogden's comment on 2005-10-03 12:46 AM
LOLZ!

Anyway, nicely done. It's brief - well compared to some, anyway - yet it's got everything there. I admire you for that - all my posts turn out to be hundreds of words long, yet they could really be summed up in half that. Good works. Go to Comment
Maganti Blades
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Murometz's comment on 2009-01-08 12:24 PM
Yet another one that is complete, succint, and flavorful.

They were made to prevent resurrection... Great, i'm always looking for ways of preventing my dead PCs from coming back lol Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 06:22 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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The Candle-Eyed Man

       By: Murometz

The third son of a candle-maker, and secretly a spy, Tsiao Fong Wei betrayed his family, clan, and town to the merciless Qongg Dynasty, causing the deaths of his own family members. He survived to an old age hiding out in the country side and keeping a low profile. One day however, the “Paper Knife” finally found Tsiao Fong Wei , and exacted his revenge on behalf of the folk, dead and tortured.

After a furious struggle, the “Paper Knife” plunged twin burning candles into the eyes of the traitorous old man and laughed, as Tsiao Fong Wei howled in dismay and pain. Some say Tsiao Fong Wei died that day. Others say that the old man somehow escaped despite his sudden anguish and utter blindness.

The truth is lost to time.

But to this day the children of the Red-Ridge County towns and villages are told by their parents to always beware twin lights in the darkness and to never venture into the woods at night, and to keep an ear open for the Groaning Ghost, for somewhere out there Tsiao Fong Wei the Traitor, now a vengeful spirit, stumbles about the darkness moaning and wailing, candles still sticking forth from out of his otherwise empty eye sockets. And though the candles plunged into his eyes all those years ago were a’flame going in, now the wax protuberances are somehow lit from within and burn without, and two flickering lights in the darkness, always portend his coming.

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