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The city has a thousand stories
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-16 11:15 AM
Thats okay - I was floating it to see how it would take off - and I have my answer. What problem do you have with it? My thoughts were too many encounters had the PC's arriving right in the middle of things, but that is statistically unlikely :) unless the PC's are instigators of the action. Go to Comment
The city has a thousand stories
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-16 03:12 PM
K, I did note that the format was optional in the main text of the sub :)

I'll have to add a few that don't follow the format to set a precedance. Perhaps it will see more use then.

I won't be continuing use of that format based on the response to this sub so far. Go to Comment
Domain Of Huokorloctol
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 11:21 AM
Interesting crossover piece indeed, though perhaps links to the appropriate other submissions are in order.

An interesting story, though I found a few of the sentences overlong. Go to Comment
The Celebration Thread
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-15 10:06 AM
A good idea, that did not appear to get any traction.

Do not have ideas at the moment, though it is food for thought.
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Mirruva Fox
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-06 01:36 PM
Almost a carnivorous squirrel. I like it! Go to Comment
Morghwann Seed
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 03:01 PM
You could use an Alchemical preparation to surpress the nausea perhaps (Super Gravol) :) Go to Comment
Preserver Thought
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-08 07:21 PM
Good solid Kerran post. You have put an awful lot of work into this world and it shows! Go to Comment
Inns and Taverns of Antioch
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 12:07 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Old Code
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-03 07:28 PM
Very useful sub! Go to Comment
Jaith, the Message
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-01 01:57 PM
Great Job! Go to Comment
Boldrei the Barber-Chiurgeon
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-01 09:02 AM
I have to say this is the best NPC I've seen on this site.

The picture painted of his shop is wonderful.

5/5! Go to Comment
Darome Rikael
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-03 07:26 PM
An interesting sub, though some of the paragraphs seem a little long, at least for me.

Well described. Good job! Go to Comment
John Bloodycoat
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-01 01:59 PM
A great story, and I love the choice of period.

Well Done! Go to Comment
Encyclopedia Kerrenica
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-03 07:19 PM
An interesting read - not too useful to me directly, but also an excellent inspiration. Go to Comment
Sagas of Kerren
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-23 07:55 PM
I think taken as a whole they are an interesting and detailed submission. Good inspirational material! Go to Comment
Against the Storms - The Kerren Setting
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-03 07:14 PM
I find the amount of work and breadth of this world truely impressive. Now, I am not going to run a Kerren campaign any time soon, but it is very good source of inspiration.

Strangely, I've never read any of the Pern series. Perhaps it's time to take a look at them. Go to Comment
The Star of Eleuthisa
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 01:05 PM
The writing is excellent, but I am having a bit of trouble sorting out the details.

What is provided is good for use as legends to provide to PCs, etc when researching the item, but the real details of the item would be useful. At some point we need a little more then pure narration. Some of the other formatting tools - Bold, Italics, BlockQuotes, in moderation, would help as well.

Where did it really come from and what are it's abilities?

That said, for a 1st submission, it is really good. Go to Comment
The Banner of the Golden Serpent
Items  (Art and Music)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 12:30 PM
Great job Wulfhere! Go to Comment
The Banner of the Golden Serpent
Items  (Art and Music)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 08:16 PM
K, those revisions really improved the submission! Awesome job - as usual :) Go to Comment
Corvius Haereticus
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 12:29 PM

Nothing to add here - Awesome. Go to Comment
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       By: axlerowes

One of the PCs comes across a magical ring that grants some power but has odd aura as if cursed. Yet this curse is different than the standard curse. When the PC puts on the ring he/she suddenly feels married. There is now an illusionary woman, who he/she cares deeply for but who is also always very critical of the PC. The wife is demanding of attention and constantly giving the PC directions. The PC wearing the ring is the only one that can see and hear the bride. The curse can never completely be lifted. Even if the PC takes off the ring and somebody else puts the ring on; the PC will still be visited by the ex-wife at least once a month. During this visit she will demand money and apologies.

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