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The Legend of Still and Limbo
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2014-12-03 11:45 AM
Some really neat ideas here. I think it needs a little more explanation outside of the first person to explain what you are really presenting here.
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30 Chinese Archaic Names
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-18 10:50 AM
I'd ditch the Incomplete tag on this one. This one is Excellent. Informative and useful. Go to Comment
Attack on Titan/Tales of Symphonia Campaign Hybrid
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2017-02-14 11:52 AM
I have long considered Attack On Titans a great idea for a campaign - and I really need to push back against the reception this post received.

I want to put to bed the idea of the Golden Standard being the be-all and end-all of content. What we should be doing is bringing and sharing ideas, and if some of us want to produce polished works which can earn HOH's and Goldens, and 5 votes, so be it. Don't look at everything with that eye - it should be fairly obvious if a submission is of the 'share the idea' variety or the 'fine art' quality. Consider the default to be 'share the idea'.

Especially from a new poster. The feedback here turned someone who could have been a promising member into a 1-day wonder.





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Divinity, Faith, and the Divine Significance of the Materium
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-21 01:11 PM
A good treatment of the subject - Faith as mentioned seems to be a fairly common mechanism. The need for physical avatars to act is a good one.


This chasing of faith has one side effect - it essentially predisposes gods to be selfish and capitalistic in nature, which somewhat precludes truly 'good' gods. Those gods which hold to 'good' principles will , barring some major change in humanity, be at a distinct disadvantages to those gods who will do anything they can to obtain Faith.

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The Sundered Fields
Locations  (Other)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-20 09:29 AM
A memorable location, though there are some nit-picky logistical details that spring out at me. I'm not sure how there could be enough fuel to burn for two years, unless it was an exposed coal seam or a tire dump :)

I'm also curious on what the goblins eat that they would thrive in such a region, where no live trees are. Did the massive deposits of ash provide fertile soil?

The fact that they have any desire to obtain ore implies they have a good source of some type of fuel, for carting firewood to smelt ore would be rather expensive. This points to the coal seam as being possible.



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Myzrym
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 02:19 PM
Well, that is very Old School indeed! Reminds me of some of the PC's I've seen from that era.... :)

I think it needs a magic ring that replicates a Deck of Many Things and to somehow mix in a Sphere of Annihilation.



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The Aetherium and the Nature of the Soul
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-19 12:37 PM
A good discussion on the subject. Not revolutionary, but it helps tie things together. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 01:23 PM
You can add them as a link in your submission by simply enclosing them with square brackets.

I would not, however, put such links in the summary.

Once you have good number of submissions, we can create a region for you to use to gather these together. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 09:47 AM
This is a great creation story for your world - gives lots to build off of. Muros question and your answer are great.


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Halimath the Wanderer
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-13 09:26 AM
Awesome! I look forward to his accounts of your world.

My god, leveling up would have taken forever :)



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The Totem of Nahual
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 12:36 PM
That is certainly a cool take on Catwoman. Given how it destroys the host, how would you end up with Catwoman lasting long enough to become a fixture?

I hope, however, the Penguin won't get quite the same treatment :)



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101 Chinese Modern names
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-18 11:09 AM
Such a useful submission. Awesome! Go to Comment
101 Chinese Modern names
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-18 11:11 AM
Great stuff!

Now where is the generator of which you speak?

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Hammer Of Spirit Binding
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-10 02:38 PM
Update: Out with ye. Go to Comment
Plutopolis
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-10-08 11:46 AM
Well, there is a lot to work with here. Many possibilities for its use.

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NPC List For 1640s Demon Hunting
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-04 02:44 PM
Great details! Excellent characters/ Good stuff! Go to Comment
Time Spent With Trolls
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-03 02:02 PM
An amusing account of the Troll behavior and adds needed depth to the creatures.

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The Headless Motorcycle Man
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-10 12:19 PM
The prior comments have hit all of the points methinks. It is quite cool and well presented.
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Book of Memorization (a Tale of Mysantia)
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-12-05 08:48 AM
These feel like the exhortations of a magic-users personal assistant :)
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Mistflowers
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-28 11:03 AM
I cleaned out the junk, but you need to fix your browser -it is corrupted and potentially introducing malware to you - and through the added links - potentially others. Most of the links appeared to be trackers, but they could do worse.

Please fix your browser. You should also virus scan your PC.
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       By: CaptainPenguin

A civilization which constructs of irregular shapes constructed of a light metal, heaped together so that they stand on each other; these structures rattle and bend in the wind or at a push, but ultimately hang together except under heavy force (such as cannonballs, falling stones, floods)

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