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Nartine the Stubborn, Avatar of Mathom
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Strolen's comment on 2017-09-05 01:16 PM
Great addition to Mathom! Very, very fun and fitting. Blends well with our limited expectations and a brilliant expansion.

I almost wanted Nartine to inadvertently prevent some kind of deeds by her stubbornness. King stuck at the gate foiled an assassination attempt. The horse breaking its leg saved a child it would have hit later. But then I figured that would be too much actual accomplishment so I dropped the idea.

Great sub to respark one of our favorite subs! Go to Comment
Gigmucc the Frogman
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Strolen's comment on 2017-09-05 01:20 PM
I love that you are connecting your subs to others!

This is a great background for an interesting creature. Wondering what the Red Light district would find useful of course....but then again, not sure I want to know.

Fun, colorful character that was well described in its short introduction. Go to Comment
Traveling Performance Troupe
Society/ Organizations  (Artistic/Performance)   (World Wide)
Strolen's comment on 2017-08-05 02:55 PM
Solid idea. Interesting take with the disenfranchised half-beings is good. Nothing special about it, just a good idea seed to start some brainstorming. Some example NPCs with some short histories or maybe some short anecdotes on what the troupe has encountered to give it some more depth would make it easier to see your vision.

What this is primed for is a Checka special: 30 Traveling Troupe Characters.

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Logeko the Vile
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
Strolen's comment on 2017-08-05 03:10 PM
Exploding heads. Good golly gee whiz Scras. LOL

I did laugh when I read the "perfume of the grave" that was awesome!

Fun, descriptive undead. Love it. Go to Comment
Wolf Knights of Falkwrath
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
Strolen's comment on 2017-08-05 03:01 PM
A great start that really has potential to jump to a higher vote. The core is there though, just enough to get the mind rolling.

I was hoping for more about the silver axe. The foreboding, the usage, how they contain their own order when they know the madness is coming and how they keep it secret. There is a depth to this post where we are only seeing the tip. Would really love to hear more on it. Also a bit more on the land. With an order spread through the land with different lodges, lycanthropy must play a large part in the land. Which gets me curious about that too.

And, yes, great first post! Go to Comment
30 Knives
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Strolen's comment on 2017-08-05 03:13 PM
I always love your lists Cheka!! They are FANTASTIC fodder for random charts for almost any game. Super useful and always have some creative ideas in there are sometimes simple yet unique and others that are just brilliant.

Thanks for another great list!

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7 Things About Fate of the Furious
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
Strolen's comment on 2017-04-17 09:02 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Dolen Luth
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2017-02-12 07:52 PM
Clever is right. That is a really cool idea. And there is a very large amount of skill needed to use that cane so even if it fell into the wrong hands it would be basically useless to them, even in they could engage the braille.

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Book Called Regret
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Cursed)
Strolen's comment on 2006-02-05 07:25 AM
I like the book a lot and the way it is presented is just fine, no issues on that. The question I have is about your percieved availability of the book. From the first part I get conflicts whether it is a single book that is handed around or something that can be created by those that know how. Refering to "the creator" implies that many can be made yet it seems a somewhat specialized item that is tied to a specific circumstance that wouldn't readily be duplicated.

The other thing I felt needed a little more was on how somebody would give this as a gift if it was a single item. It seems to me that the book should effect every person that holds it, not just an intended victim? In this case then it might be difficult for the current reader to give it away in the first place unless he already knows the nature of the book and doesn't get addicted to it. Maybe I am catching that one the wrong way though. Go to Comment
Book Called Regret
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Cursed)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-16 12:57 PM

Still plenty of time before Murometz's gauntlet throw comes into affect. I still thing there is goodness in here!!

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Book Called Regret
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Cursed)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-10 02:43 PM
We are getting AWFULLY close to this. Uh oh. Go to Comment
Options for expanded character backgrounds
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
Strolen's comment on 2016-08-31 10:40 AM
Awesome, well articulated ideas and how to use them. The ideas were fantastic. The examples solidified the point and the overall explanation made it super easy to understand, take and use.

Fantastic idea, love it! Go to Comment
Whitestill, the First Sister
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Strolen's comment on 2016-08-31 10:50 AM
Can't really vote on it as it is a somewhat confusing telling. Most of it is about the person but I am grasping at it to determine why she is legendary. Starting at "The age of 15" all the narration after that makes no sense to me and that was what I was counting on to see the legendary aspect of the character. You tell me she is the most influential but I am failing to fully understand why. I need a tale, not just a basic discussion of various bullet points. Go to Comment
7 Things About Suicide Squad
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Players)
Strolen's comment on 2016-08-31 11:07 AM
I have been meh about seeing it. As far as super hero movies go, I have been burned out since the second Spiderman. However, I did watch Deadpool and enjoyed it and this one is on the list. Go to Comment
7 Things About Suicide Squad
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Players)
Strolen's comment on 2016-09-10 11:45 AM
I didn't even watch the Garfield one. Or most of the new X-Men variations. Watched Captain America Winter whatever and that was good, but couldn't keep track and lost interest. Go to Comment
Brass Man
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Strolen's comment on 2016-03-20 06:17 PM
Gave me good visuals! Go to Comment
The Xan-Axe
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2016-02-14 10:13 AM
Love the story on it. Great weapon!!

I would read expanded fiction about this sword. Your story taking us through its inheritance was a lot of fun. I found myself wanting you to draw it out and write more.

Thumbs up! Go to Comment
The War Drum of Oyr
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2016-02-14 10:20 AM
A fun idea.

I was idly wondering if nobody was actively warring, would the sounds still reverberate as mentioned. So if this drum found its way into a humble village and they used it for celebration or ritual. They wouldn't notice much about it except it is a nice drum. But maybe 2 clans are at war not super far away and they keep hearing this mysterious beat of a drum.... Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Strolen's comment on 2015-12-12 09:13 AM
Sick, deluded brainstorming.

The mutated offspring of a forced mating have a halved lifespans. During that lifespan, however, they are basically slaves to the whore-spider. They collect food, provide protection etc. They have partial morph abilities that can cause quite an odd shape when scared or captured. They are not able to control the shifting as well as their parents so often, if seen or captured, they twist into grotesque shapes of random spiders and bugs they have come across.

If birthed away, they are bold and brazen in trying to find their way back to the sire. They will wander aimlessly and not back down from any sized barrier or danger. The poisonous types of these are most dangerous to humans who are in their path as their morphing abilities often translate into survival skills and enhanced poisons.

When two whore-spiders meet, they fall into the spell of each other's luring skills and procreate till the male dies of exhaustion. During this intense workout, a non-sticky version of their webbing is constantly being thrown out and is twisted and strewn about. Sometimes, but not often, the spiders may get entwined in it and both perish. This thread is coveted for something...

Alchemists use their venom to make love potion #9? When found with the webbing....?

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Phantom Wood
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Strolen's comment on 2015-12-13 10:19 AM
Loved it!

As I read it I had ton of questions and ideas and as I continued they were all answered or acknowledged so, by the time I was done, I was extremely happy with all that you came up with!

I added my Carpenter's Ring to it as I feel that it might be a handy tool for this precise circumstance.

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Sleeping Knights

       By: Cheka Man

A rumour of the knights of some powerful king that sleep until danger threatens the kingdom.

The truth is that they were rebels, trying to split the kingdom. Once captured they were put into an enchanted sleep, protected from age and harm, until their aims have been carried out by others in which case they will awaken.

There is a loophole in the spell in that trying to take one of their weapons will also awaken them.

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