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Clan Ironspirit
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-02 03:10 AM
I dont know how I overlooked this submission! I like the premise of the adoption of the illigetimates, but I can see there being some hostility on the part of some more paranoid nobles, since Ironspirit has ties to almost every bloodline, how could they have any sense of loyalty to their bloodline over the others?

Top notch, and I like the time of Annealing. Go to Comment
Blade Hands
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-02 03:58 PM
This is a solid idea, though the whole flashing lights depending on the factor of seal breakage seems a bit over the top for me, seeming more like a sword powered disco light show. A magical verson of peace-tieing swords. Not quite as effective on maces, bows, and other weapons that do not have sheaths or scabbards Go to Comment
The Potion of Explosive Entrails
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-02 06:33 AM
What a fiendishly nasty surprise for any band of adventurers, the goblin bomb-man Go to Comment
The Kamuinji Sabre
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-02 06:31 AM
I like the fact that it is made of a crystal metal alloy (watch the spelling there ;) Otherwise this is a rather generic sword. Go to Comment
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-01 06:07 PM
Well done! It is humourous and demonstrates the value of favors in the typical feudal world setting. Go to Comment
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-28 08:10 PM
Something like half of this posting didnt make it from the Scholars Canvas to the front page. I had the effects of trying to repair or exploit these dang things as well as several plot hooks. I'm going to retype it later. Please dont vote on this until then.

I feel disgusted.

addenum - 03/01/06 - completed the post, feel free to vote and comment. I restored as much as I could from memory, but I feel that something vital was lost in the retype. Go to Comment
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-01 06:44 PM
Updated: Added everything after Over explointation Go to Comment
Scroll Gholem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-28 04:39 PM
Major points for excellent presentation. I would make the intro shorter, but that is just me. Go to Comment
Broom of the Dai Kiri
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-28 04:06 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Maidenhead Wasp
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-27 09:14 PM

That is really wierd as hell, I'm going to be hard pressed to find someway to work that into a game Go to Comment
The Backbreaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-27 05:27 PM
I can imagine this massive weapon, its formerly pristine white head now flaking and splitting, with the cracks stained crimson and black from the gore of those it has slain. No man alive can now carry it into battle, but perhaps one day another will rise to take the hammer. Kind of a Sword in the Stone sorta deal, but much more brutal, and much more ugly.

+1 for the awesome names.

Ribcage Destroyer...meh likes Go to Comment
Bone Bow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-27 05:15 PM
Just for the record, I am never going to play NWN, just like the Captain isnt going to play Dungeons and Dragons. This post is too short and as Mourngrymn says it needs a better description, and backstory. It is too open ended and lacking in detail.

+.5 points for inspiring Mourn's posting Go to Comment
Bone Bow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-02 05:50 PM
The rewrite is good, having addressed the question of lack of detail as well as giving powers in terms in addition to the stats. Good follow up. Go to Comment
Troll Belt
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-27 05:17 PM
Lets wrap ourselves in troll guts made by (insert mage's name)

Thank you, no. Go to Comment
Troll Belt
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-02 04:25 PM
Now I am begining to really like this Sigrin fellow, he's sick in the head and resourceful. 1/5 improved to a 3/5 Go to Comment
Troll Gloves
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-27 05:24 PM
The best of the trio, the gloves have some promise, though i think that each item granting regeneration is a bit much, a play could easily swath themselves in repellant troll bit magic items and end up with +3 or more regeneration a turn. Too stackable, and lacking in detail.

It is one thing to leave a submission open ended for adoption into anyone's home campaign, it is entirely another to take something from a video game and drop it in with the most minor of modification. Go to Comment
Troll Gloves
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-02 04:21 PM
A definate improvement. The backstory gives the rest of a feel for the item, where it came from and the reason it was created. In accordance, I have increased my vote for this it from a 2 to a 3. Go to Comment
Censer of Mal'Mennoth
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-27 05:34 PM
Now this is what kind of evil I like to have for dinner! Superb work Siren, the imagry and irony applied were great. Go to Comment
The Hunter's Neckband
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-27 05:31 PM
While not earthshattering, a very well written and presented loup-de-noir type magic item, be careful what you wish for, as they say. Go to Comment
Ahoi Worm
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-26 07:59 AM
What a viciously nasty little beastie Maggot! It is vile, revolting, and its lifestyle is both well documented as it is disgusting. That being said, I like it, both it's plausible mode of feeding and reproduction as well as its exploitation by the Quarsooth military. Go to Comment
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A small group of men stares intensely at something. Coming nearer, you see puppies, obviously still young, as they are small and only learn to walk. Cute as they are, the men look serious and exchange a comment here and there, making their mother nervous. But one man keeps her somewhat calm, while looking with others on the little ones.

The puppies are a completely new dog breed. The breeder hopes for better characteristics, the other men are mostly hunters and other dog-fanciers, that were called or came from own interest. If all looks well, they will have business. But now, they are just watching.

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