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A Field Guide to Werewolves
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-02-27 06:09 PM
Ambitious, but a good idea! Will you also include weres other than wolves? I have had some very memorable experiences with wererats and werebears. I hope for more! Go to Comment
David Branch, Cult Leader
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-02-27 06:15 PM
Nice character, with a nice Call of Cthulhu vibes; but posting character stats? Bad Mojo, dude.

The character makes an interesting villain, but to get rid of the demon, he either has to totally redeem himself, or find a bigger demon..... Go to Comment
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-02-12 01:52 PM
A bit cynical but otherwise an excellent adventurers' trap... Just surviving the new Abydos before setting of for the Necropolis, is an adventure in itself. 5/5 Go to Comment
Hanetta's Millstone
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-02-08 07:37 AM
An original item, provisions are often a forgotten part of adventuring. I would have like some more details in the description, this can not to just plain stone, and maybe some unique recipes that can only be made with this magical mill. Gold bread for the king, bone cookies for the necromancer? Go to Comment
The Hemangini Flying Squirrel
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Mountains)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-27 03:03 PM
The natural consumers of Hemangini nuts I presume? This nicely anticipates a question regarding the trees: if you have naturally evolved plants using metal, it is very likely you have an ecosystem that uses metal. These squirrels can crack the metal nuts, are in turn hunted upon by silver foxes and copper falcons, who are in turn hunted by iron wolves or mithral eagles, etcetera. Of course, any species that literally eats money is in big trouble - though I can imagine a rogue setting some of these squirrels free in the vault of someone who did not pay the protection money.... Go to Comment
Hemangini Tree
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-26 01:25 PM
Ws there not already a tree like this on this site? I imagine elves would like these trees; this way they can get their metals without ugly mining, dwarves of course rather mine. Maybe the few rare dwarven druids would cultivate a few of these trees In a scify-setting trees like these would be alien fauna or the product of advanced bioengineering. Maybe growing on the old ruines of our civilization.... Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Space)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-22 09:28 AM
Truly good space-zombie variant. And the background story is great too. The only things I wonder about is whether the wireless network the crystals form can be interrupted or even be hacked, and whether it is possible to cure an infected person. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Space)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-23 12:01 PM
A new question: do I read it correctly that cold-blooded creatures do not "activate" the srpores? If there are cold-blooded aliens, than these might carry spores without knowing it (or so they say...) Meanwhile, survivors of these zombies might become quite paranoid about dust and glittering particles. Go to Comment
The Shaolangan religion
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-19 04:00 AM
Decent, deserves to be expanded upon. The art remembers me of Ancient Indian temples, the martyred aspect has a Christian vibe. Go to Comment
Ming-Na Xiang
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-11 03:57 PM
Excellent character, a full 5/5!
If you take out the ki-stuf, good for any modern setting. Though that Cthulupunk is sounding more and more interesting.... Go to Comment
Musher Bugs
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Other)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-11 08:15 AM
Now this is truly nasty. Seems to be something to inflict on a careless mage, or why there are so few archmagi. Or why an ancient civilazation fell in the first place. Do they attack all creatures equally or do they have a preference? Go to Comment
Musher Bugs
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Other)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-11 03:45 PM
For some reason, that vote button does not appear on my browser, while it does automatically logs me in. Go to Comment
Oscar the Uplifted Octopus
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-11 08:10 AM
Sounds like an interesting setting, and genetic engeneering is very likely to get a complex creature right on the first go. Many octopi are solitary predators/scavengers, so it is understandable if any uplifted species do not turn out very sociable. Tough someone has to have him teached some cursewords.... Any more on that setting? Go to Comment
Oscar the Uplifted Octopus
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-11 03:49 PM
Doh! I wanted to say "wrong", not right. So hard thinking about the one I wrote the opposite... If the genengineers wanted a social cephalopod, they might have been better off with a cuttlefish. Go to Comment
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-11 07:18 AM
Is this like some "reverse rust", a material only usefull in oxydized form, useless otherwise? It is easy to see how terrestial civilazations mighy have overseen such an material; trying to melt it like other metals woult only produce a worthless dust. Though maybe deserts that were once seas might have deposits of it in dust-form. It seems like the ideal material for submarine life, but if your campaign does not take to the seas... Go to Comment
falling empires
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Phaidros's comment on 2012-01-03 09:39 PM
A pity, while not a great post, it has potential. I like the notions of no prophesies and the different factions which are at odds, both are big departures from the standard fantasy scenario for falling empires. Go to Comment
The Arcology
Locations  (City)   (Any)
Phaidros's comment on 2011-12-31 05:42 AM
Simply excellent. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seven Snakes
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Phaidros's comment on 2011-12-28 10:25 AM
Good description, though the backstory of why the staff is not as strongly linked to the other items as these are, might use an expansion. In a campaign to re-unite the Seven Treasures, the intelligence of the staff (where does that come from, btw?) Would be an inside-job enemy.

Meanwhile, I hope you compile all the lore parts to one storyline, it sounds like a great story. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Phaidros's comment on 2011-12-16 09:39 PM
Beautiful description, with lot of juicy details, with many possibilities. In other settings, Ar'ael would be the big gun, highest possible summon, or most powerfull angel of a Deity. I do not know how that arcanatech works, but if she strictly spoken a golem is, then a occult conspiracy might have created her to discredit religion. Of course, just as with the veterans, inadvertently a religion might be created.....

A question, does Ar'ael have any intelligence or sentience? All that believe might create one, one that probably will try to confirm to the believers' expectations. Her creators might have created a bigger problem than the one Ar'ael had to solve. Go to Comment
Rhojin's Tower
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Phaidros's comment on 2011-12-11 04:26 PM
Another fun idea that makes me wish I had thought of it. While in function no different from existing items like a portable hole or folding house, the thematic link with the sparrow-familliar raises it above the fold. I would just like to have some twist or drawback added, to prevent it from begin too good.

Maybe after exiting, one must make a willsave or one believes to be a bird for an hour? Or cats are attracted to the birdhouse, and can attack trough the hole?

Otherwise, 4/5 Go to Comment
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