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Ejacel: the stone of secrets
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Pariah's comment on 2005-10-04 03:46 PM
Good idea, but I agree with cheka, it could use some more explaining. An idea on where it went, maybe when the wizard enchanted it he made it so that he orb would teleport to his place of birth/college/other importent place. Go to Comment
Ejacel: the stone of secrets
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Pariah's comment on 2005-10-05 03:31 PM
I thought taht he meant that the orb would turn into the girl. Go to Comment
Ring of Opposites
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Pariah's comment on 2005-10-02 07:36 PM
4/5 Great item. All of the nitpicks I have with it have already been covered. So on to the idea mill.

You could make instant civil war in one of your enemies realms by mass producing these and then "accidentally" having a box fall out of the back of a wagon in the middle of the city. Of couse you'd have to make sure you left town REALLY fast or you'd die too.

Or you could get a sneaky theif to replace the princes wedding ring with a disguised one of these. Put the Diamond/Ruby/Precious Gem over the mirror and switch the two. Boy would that cause some inter-kingdom problems when the king's only son, half of his entourage, and the princess's father, were brutally murdered as soon as the prince said his vows.

See how much havok people can have with something that a mage made innocently trying to cure his daughter of insanity. Almost makes you wonder why my PCs still try on every ring that I give to them. But it does explain the fact that they are missing half of their fingers on their left hand. Go to Comment
The Caedea
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
Pariah's comment on 2005-10-02 07:44 PM
Yummy like pie. I love this, it'll fit well into my world where many people seem to find happiness in slaughter. Maybe give it to my lawful pain in the butt palidin, see how long he can stand up to the temptation.

What would happen if Jack himself put it on though? Would he decide to just go downtown and kill as many people at once as he could before he got taken down or what? Go to Comment
Dalme The Tinker
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Pariah's comment on 2005-10-03 10:51 PM
I like him, great way to explain how the locals came to be so wretched without a dictator sitting over them demanding all their crops or the like. Go to Comment
Combusting Shrews
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Pariah's comment on 2007-01-15 09:12 PM
The suicide chicken. Go to Comment
The Doll House
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Pariah's comment on 2005-10-31 10:43 PM
I'm going to have to ask the same question as manfred, why? Is it an evil sorceror at work, and if it is, why didn't he have them play with the kids instead of the parents. Or is it the god of trickery, looking for another cheap laugh, I could almost see that. I don't know, it just seems to be missing a purpose.

3/5 - It's good, but could use a bit of refining. Go to Comment
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Pariah's comment on 2006-07-24 11:00 PM
It streches credibility everyonce in a while, but not any more than your average movie. Cash is payable in banknotes, with no more than 5 in a series. Go to Comment
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Pariah's comment on 2006-04-26 04:46 PM
Maybe it's heated enough so that the bolt spreads out on contact with the target. So while it may cauterize the wound on entry it would still provide a rather larger hole than a standard crossbow bolt. And as to your comment about firey ordinance being used in battle causing as much damage to friend as foe, so does anything that deals damage remotely. Friendly fire isn't. This applies as much for cold crossbow bolts as warm/hot ones. Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Pariah's comment on 2006-01-10 08:21 PM
Yeah, makes me think of poor Gollum too. It was the 'They Lies Master' that did it for me.

Good Job Go to Comment
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
Pariah's comment on 2006-04-06 04:02 PM
I was almost tempted to give it a +.5 just cause he used wery instead of very ever single time. But no. Go to Comment
The Temple of the First Man
Locations  (Establishment)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Pariah's comment on 2006-08-16 04:55 PM
Wow... You put a lot into this. It's pretty. Go to Comment
Spirit Beacons
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Pariah's comment on 2005-12-23 11:22 PM
Reading the comments I notised something, Moon voted high to hlp balance out other people votinglow, but 5 seemed to be a pretty common vote on this item. Go to Comment
Fools Dagger of Invisibility
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
Pariah's comment on 2005-12-22 06:39 PM
Good Job. Invisible to yourself, hehehe. Go to Comment
Damian Levine
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Pariah's comment on 2007-06-15 11:05 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Troll Rations
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Pariah's comment on 2006-10-13 09:38 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Pariah's comment on 2005-12-23 11:35 PM
Good, a tad cliche but everyone needs a cliche or two to get the job done. Go to Comment
The World of the Iron Heart
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Pariah's comment on 2006-04-28 11:53 PM
mmm. Attack the PCs with a mutated salmenala virus, fun. Go to Comment
The Ruined City
Locations  (Any)   (City)
Pariah's comment on 2006-05-22 05:13 PM
I like it, quite a bit. *sniff* Nothing better than the smell of ruined civilzatin in the morning. Go to Comment
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Pariah's comment on 2008-05-20 07:36 PM
Jayed!!! You get 3 thumbs up. Go to Comment
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