Well, at least it doesn't glow an eldritch shade of blue. I'm asuming that Tluin is unaging, because you start in one Date system and then skip it's logical counterpart into another system entirely. Just briefly, what are the Knights of the Red Blades? Who is Eldearth?
Plot Hook: PC's gain possession of the sword, but find that the prior owner isn't quite as dead as previously thought, and he'd kill to get his sword back. Go to Comment
I love it in it's depressed withdrawal of most any sensory input.
And quotes from Thief: The Dark Project
"...And the manfools piled rock on rocks and raised a treesie roof, hammers saws tear the skin of goodsie wood... ...and laughs at the Woodsie Lord. ...And when learns the Lord of this, He sends His beastesses to the manfools... ...who attacks and hammers saws their useless fleshes, and build him a house of they rotting skins."
-Unattributed Trickster song
"Builds your roofs of dead wood. Builds your walls of dead stone. Builds your dreams of dead thoughts. Comes crying laughing singing back to life, takes what you steal, and pulls the skins from your dead bones shrieking."
-Clay tablet in an abandoned Trickster temple
"He am the leaf that feeders on the fleshed ones. Thems that calls themselves Builders and wielded up a hammers against him!"
-Viktoria, servent to the Trickster
"My poor Mister Garrett, you will not live to SEE the sprawling glory of it! Your sacrifice is not yet complete! Mine lilacs and mine thistles must feeds, and I? Stands He then in the greens and festered Maw and speeds He out his judgements upon the weeps and writhing manfools!"
-The Trickster himself, addressing the player Go to Comment
Do trolls count as demi-human? Because that'd be scary. It regenerates it's lost blood just as fast as the rose drinks, it's covered in thorns and enjoys slaughtering little meaty things.
And as far as their warriors go, I doubt that every one of them would do it. You'd have some of your elite ue this, and if the enemies were scarce for a while, in addition to everyone in the village donating a cup of blood, you might sacrifice the old man, or the terminably ill guy. I really like it, of course that might just be 'cause of my sorking on a new, more primitive, setting. Go to Comment
As has been said it's a good post, if a bit plain. I however have absolutely no problems with the names, but as CP has pointed out before, I either pirate or modify names/places that I see/read, where as he goes out and makes entirely new ones. Go to Comment
The local temple is known for putting words of wisdom of stele, in and anround the temple. These words of wisdom are normally temple proverbs or wise words, but sometimes they are "singing the praises" of any large contributor or a noble who grants them a special law. If you need proverbs and quotes for them, search a few quote and proverb sites, concentrating on religions like the temples. Put these quotes in a word doc or list, that way you can always "whip out" a bit of wisdom.