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The Virednith
Items  (Other)   (Combat)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-21 10:15 PM
Wow, that is an amazing weapon and really good plot hooks, that last one is kinda disturbing
Can't wait for the GM to tell the players what they have just done if they sell it Go to Comment
Items  (Materials)   (Villanous)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-17 09:53 PM
I don't like the ability to use it above ground if it an overcast day, or to read things in the shade, that makes it kind of comedic and pointless, I would make a nice helm and carry around an umbrella Go to Comment
Whistle of Big Game Summoning
Items  (Tools)   (Cursed)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-08 01:50 PM
haha, that is a good story there well written and hilarious Go to Comment
The Dawn Of Avarice
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-08 11:36 AM
This is a neat world and the gems are really interesting, but I love your NPCs and thier kingdoms above all, this could be the start of a really great campaign

Also, the way you have the roles PCs would have, based on level is spot on
5/5 Go to Comment
The Tower of Ash
Dungeons  (Other)   (Style)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-06 05:36 PM
I really enjoyed your sinful ghostly guardians, they're are well designed and I want to see pictures
The Caretaker is benevolent? If the heroes within are not worthy, would he still praise their attempt on the tower, if they are malevolent and only going inside for their own greed, would he still act this way, if they aren't learning a damn thing

The structure is interesting, but the purpose is strange especially for something so merciful and miraculous as an aid to a small village.

How many times has this happened before?

I hate to vote now, so I wont... Go to Comment
The Tower of Ash
Dungeons  (Other)   (Style)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-07 02:38 AM
Wulf has convinced me Go to Comment
Rustcaller Toxin
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-03 11:27 PM
this has a really cool effect, nicely detailed and horrific
like the waiting time on it, how long can the poison last on a piece? Go to Comment
Alowin Brackwater
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-02 08:43 AM
No clue how to use it though, but an interesting artifact and a great story Go to Comment
Star of Rage
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-01 10:09 PM
suicide bomber or the Japanese Fighter Pilots is my view, would an affected person actually submit to having it taken off their body?

Now knowing your enemy has these, would you in turn equip your men with them knowing the cost or would this turn into an arms race Go to Comment
The Cursing Jar
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Villanous)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-01 01:06 AM
sweet tool for revenge, but you have to pay your pound of flesh Go to Comment
The Cursing Jar
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Villanous)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-01 10:45 AM
Now, I would love to create a fake jar, but deaths keep happening, it is just coincidents that the targets are dying in weird ways, but the curser is still losing fingers Go to Comment
The Cursing Jar
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Villanous)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-03-01 01:26 PM
Now that is a brilliant twist, the souls of those revenged upon being contained in the jar and released against the owner to take back more than just fingers

here's a question does it just have the ten charges per user, or if I had a PC with 6 fingers on each hand...

what about others fingers?

Also the proper use of names is interesting, names are powerful and I would not have this work unless the true name was known Go to Comment
Goblin Snuff
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-28 05:21 AM
Felsk is my new favorite word, right up there with Bojo

This is a very interesting drug and I love the addition of how human noses react to it, stupid gobs Go to Comment
Grandmothers' House
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-28 05:55 PM
Updated: fixed some sentences Go to Comment
MUL-FS550 Fire Support Robot
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-27 08:16 AM
Ok, I am liking these robots, especially the intro passages, and the tech specs
but why create them, who created them, any backstory to the war? Go to Comment
Salvorathan - A Sci-Fi Take On Dwarves.
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Space)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-23 12:27 AM
Wow, this is a great race for space travel, I really like your attention to scientific accuracy and some of the detail choices, like the skin pigmentation.

So these Salvorathans have no planet, what do they fight for? Do they have a safe haven, ports or space stations, how well do they get along with other races, who are their enemies, Do they have their own language?

I love the vacuum adaptations Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-23 01:09 PM
Very cool entry, why isn't it linked to the swamp creatures thread Go to Comment
30 Aristocrats
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-22 10:19 PM
Done, yay Ria
I love them all Go to Comment
Cristo "Crowstalker" Givenns
NPCs  (Extras)   (Agricultural)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-19 03:26 PM
In the tall stalks, any movement would irk him, something is in his fields... Go to Comment
The Scene is Set...
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-22 02:53 PM
Calling on the town medic, you find his study in disarray, blood on the operating table, and tears in the floor leading to the basement door which is bolted shut. Go to Comment
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Trapped in his tomb, but alive, the God of Pain awaits his uleashing, said to be at the end of the world, he uses his only powers he can and calls to him 2 people, a man and a women to reliquish him from his prison. The man and the women, decieved by them thinking it a person trapped, go after to help the God of Pain unwittily and let him destroy the world

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