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Kostovic the Inept
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-24 03:35 PM
To be honest, he needs his personality fleshed out - how does he react to the mistakes? How does he deal with them?
What about self-esteem?
A little flesh on the bones is what he needs. Go to Comment
Master Simonus
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-24 03:32 PM
An interesting character to have at a court - not a paramount of goodness, just an honest and decent man who thinks people shouldn't hurt others and all'd be good.
Through him, many a plot could spring into being, and manya player will like him. Go to Comment
Petra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-14 02:53 PM
'Tis a very pleasant and touching story, a classic - Pygmalion and Galateia, ancient Greece ... does spark a memory indeed.

While enjoyable, I find your english most difficult to read, with incomplete and suddenly interrupted sentences, it can get confusing...

I'd prefer the sole power of love bringing the stone to life... Go to Comment
Petra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-17 02:03 PM
Now, imagine the soul in this reincarnation was a magic-hater, and Petra would try to convince him of her love, and the error of his ways as well... Go to Comment
Petra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-17 04:03 PM
A woman being courted by a stone statue of a beautiful girl would be as interesting, but less epic...
There are lots of potential in sentient golems, and lots of possible plots. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-13 04:33 PM
Okay, your desription is scarier, that's true ;) Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-14 04:58 AM
I will think about the appearance and alter it a bit. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-17 04:31 AM
Thanks for the laurels...
As for speech, the Sanguine Widowmaker can speak out loudly yet rarely does so... most often, he will simply nudge a person he has not forged a relationship with yet into the right direction, and will speak into the mind of a friend. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-11 12:20 PM
Good hint, MoonHunter. Thanks. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-11 02:55 AM
Don't worry, I've got several younger siblings, several being justkids, and plan to have kids someday myself, and would never harm a kid, nor wish harm on a child.
Mature people can handle such topics responsibly, and certainly do not delight in them, but they may be useful for gameplay to evoke a certain emotional response - for example, if youwere amongst the players encountering the Sanguine Widowmaker, the response would be exactly as intended - to creep you out, get scared and certainly not trust that cursed piece of iron, even though it might state that its intentions are lily-white.

Perhaps there should be a box to check if a post is not suitable for audiences under a certain age, due to violence, or sexual content? Go to Comment
BRS Gwynith
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-12 10:44 AM
I'd velcome if she and her personality and quirks were portayed a little more in-depth, but good none-the-less. Go to Comment
Rurik the Necromancer
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-11 08:18 AM
A solid character, the black ... uh, white, sheep of the family.

I did not know that necromancers objected to learning 'good' spells though - why, when they can be useful? They too have living minions, and if one of them gets hurt, it is best to heal him. Actually, the necromancer might feel a need to heal ihimself/i Go to Comment
Munchkin Utility Belt
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-09 04:20 AM
I almost choked on my coffee, Scras.
I know thatafew of my players would never willingly give up the belt, screaming "My precioussss!" even as they would be drawn into the munchkin - prison.
I can picture Cthulu coming over and saying: "Mortal, I curse you with ... this!"
This reminds us of an often forgotten truth:
A warrior should not fight just for the fighting itself.
A thief should not steal and backstab just because he can.
A mage's quest for power should not be only about gaining said power, but using it to furter a goal.
A priest should first of all serve his go, and then himself. An honest prayer is worth more than a smitten disbeliever. Go to Comment
Becoming a druid
Plots  (Hired)   (Encounter)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-07 09:43 AM
If it is known that one of them is a defiler, have all cast but a simple spell. So easy. "Cast a spell to prove your magic ability, so that you may continue with the contest."
Mystery solved. 2/5 Go to Comment
marantha
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-07 09:41 AM
*sigh* here we go again. Go to Comment
Rings of Consciousness
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-06 12:07 PM
A good and reasonable backstory. Adecent item to bring siblings together andallow them to cooperate. A solid 4/5 post. Go to Comment
The Ruined City
Locations  (Any)   (City)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-05 04:55 AM
One day it might become a honest city, with the inhabitants priding themselves on their descent... nowadays, it is a place to flee to, where nobody asks your name, and only cares about what you have to offer. Some of those whofled there will take up the plow again, some will embrace craft, as the city cannot steal everything. A highly unconventional army that does not fight on battlefields, but rather dark alleys, shady forests and bedchambers as well as council rooms might bring it influence and power. Strange religions unviable elsewhere might appear, and it might be the last haven for outcasts, whether due to deed or descent. Troll bouncers, orc guards, goblin seamsters, ... think of it, you find it there.
I like it a lot, a serious 4... yet the page does not let me rate it. Go to Comment
Staff of the Dark Anagog
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-03 03:42 PM
Keep in mind that most people are not familiar with the Forgotten realms, so references to it make little sense...
A good post should be usable in any setting.

As for the item - a necromancer stave enhancing necromancy powers. Made by a necromancer. Wheee! Actually, *yawn*, it is not special in any way.

a 2 I guess. Go to Comment
Ardos
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-02 07:17 PM
Hey, he's a DnD newbie, read his name *smirk*
So, this time I will play the voice of reason (me? reason? wtf?)

Hear me, o newbie, for this page here is home to many wise yet demanding game-masters, story-tellers and dungeon-keepers.

A character posted here should be unique, not what a half-demented anime writer could come up with (he's like ninja and stuff and he does magic, man, and he's ... angry! and has a ... Katana of the Gods and his papa was a demon and mama was a sea cucumber and he's kewl and stuf, yo ... well, NOT like THIS)
He should be a character comparable to a figure in a WELL-written novel, with history, personality, realistic needs and motivations.
Read some of the higher-rated posts to see what I mean - the people who write them spend even hours on ONE. You will not gain respect here by dumping a plethora of two-line posts quickly.

Also, many people are not familiar with DnD - while I personally am, I harbor few positive feelings towards it, yet at least am able to understand what a post relying heavily on the mechanics of a system is about, yet many a Strolenite will not be able to do so. System mechanics are not necessary - a good post does NOT need them, as every half-brained GM is able to fit an idea into his game mechanics, and the people here are more adept than that (mostly ;)).

So, before you flame me, consider the fact that you are trying to be a productive member of an online community dedicated to quality role-play - so listen to those who offer advice: they mean it well. You can learn a lot here, and it will improve your role-play. It's up to you.

Still, I have to rate the post an '1'. Put more effort into it next time. Go to Comment
The Sword of the Stars
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-02 07:26 PM
*sigh* A +kazillion sword of whoopass. Where have we seen this?
Actually, a better-written item with an interesting history is much more desirable.
Also, look out into the world. People are not just good or bad, they're shades of grey. So think twice before stamping alignments on things. Go to Comment
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The undead masters

       By: dark_dragon

A land is reigned by a circle of powerful men who control every aspect of the citizen's life. This cabal changes members often. In reality, the spectres of a small necromantic covent possess and control the people in power. Since they simply possess the bodies, they can leave when old age overcomes their shells and possess a new up-and-coming noble.

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