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The Crystal City
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-20 03:18 AM
Hooray. I can't vote. Whee. Go to Comment
The Crown of Pier Point
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-15 06:06 PM
One crown to rule them all, Cheka? ;) Go to Comment
Claudia
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-11 12:34 PM
The character is interesting, but needs more motivation than feeding - after 500 years of existence, Claudia will have picked up quirks, likes and dislikes, and will have opinions on most subjects - it would be interesting to hear them. Feeding and staying alive is good for insects.

Also, her father's biases will influence her actions.

Thus, her preferences might alter the view of her strongly - a Claudia who uses her wealth and power for aiding children in need might be a lily-white altruist, founding orphanages and schools, and protecting them.
But if a vengeful streak is added, she might become a vigilante, punishing those who trespass against children. If her father's dislike for priests kicks in, she might start cleansing the clergy - slaying those who pay just lip service to the teachings and harm the helpless, especially kids, in any way.

She might be obsessed with becoming mortal again, or at least growing to adult size. She could meddle in vampire politics...

If that was fleshed out, I'd gladly give a 5, so I will wait. Still, good work. Go to Comment
Dimble Stumpwater
NPCs  (Extras)   (Knowledge/Lore)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-07 04:24 AM
I think greek fire does NOT FIT WELL into a librarian's description. Go to Comment
The Indian Madu
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-07 04:20 AM
Interesting. One does grow sort of weary of rapiers and two-handed swords after a time. Go to Comment
The Highway comes to Harbuckle
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-08 02:28 AM
Has anoyone of you read Terry Pratchett's 'Sourcery' ? There, the drive of every wizard to build a tower for himself and himself only is depicted - the highest number of wizards that can cooperate is one, and what is a better abode than an ominous tower, like a warning finger, a symbol of his power (and a phallic symbol as well)?
Wizards and towers are an archetype, so closely connected that if a wizard decides to live in a comfortable villa where he does not have to walkas many stairs, all his colleagues will tap their foreheads.

Uh, and as for the post - a good one! The construction of a highway as opposed to say a pyramid is unique in encountering new problems as the construction progresses and the highway's front moves along. Go to Comment
Soup of Fertility
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-05 11:50 AM
I might note that it depends upon the female whether twins are born or not - it is the number of ova to be fertilized that determines the number of kids - if, by chance, two manage to mature at the same time, the potential for twins is given, etc.
The male must just shed enough spermatozoa to fertilize them, and this could indeed be the effect of the soup: potence, combined with desire, and a higher sperm count.

There should be a female counterpart for this, resulting in increased female fertility, to justify that 'twins' part... now, perhaps there should be several potions for the female to ward of diseases of the unborn, and ensure healthy development... I sense a thread coming up... Go to Comment
Staff of the Majordomo
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-02 03:03 AM
In a high-magicworld, this is certainly the way to go - free labor that won't rebel. Of course, the people may be upset at magical items 'stealing' their jobs, with golems and conjured servants doing chores, succubi competing with prostitues for clients, warrior demons entering the market of assassination...
Could cause some outrage amongst the populace...
a good one 4/5 Go to Comment
Semmiset
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-28 08:45 AM
It would also be good to flesh out his deity, most of all the WHY - why does he worship exactly this god, what is the god like, etc. Go to Comment
Kostovic the Inept
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-24 03:35 PM
To be honest, he needs his personality fleshed out - how does he react to the mistakes? How does he deal with them?
What about self-esteem?
A little flesh on the bones is what he needs. Go to Comment
Master Simonus
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-24 03:32 PM
An interesting character to have at a court - not a paramount of goodness, just an honest and decent man who thinks people shouldn't hurt others and all'd be good.
Through him, many a plot could spring into being, and manya player will like him. Go to Comment
Petra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-14 02:53 PM
'Tis a very pleasant and touching story, a classic - Pygmalion and Galateia, ancient Greece ... does spark a memory indeed.

While enjoyable, I find your english most difficult to read, with incomplete and suddenly interrupted sentences, it can get confusing...

I'd prefer the sole power of love bringing the stone to life... Go to Comment
Petra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-17 02:03 PM
Now, imagine the soul in this reincarnation was a magic-hater, and Petra would try to convince him of her love, and the error of his ways as well... Go to Comment
Petra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-17 04:03 PM
A woman being courted by a stone statue of a beautiful girl would be as interesting, but less epic...
There are lots of potential in sentient golems, and lots of possible plots. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-13 04:33 PM
Okay, your desription is scarier, that's true ;) Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-14 04:58 AM
I will think about the appearance and alter it a bit. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-17 04:31 AM
Thanks for the laurels...
As for speech, the Sanguine Widowmaker can speak out loudly yet rarely does so... most often, he will simply nudge a person he has not forged a relationship with yet into the right direction, and will speak into the mind of a friend. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-11 12:20 PM
Good hint, MoonHunter. Thanks. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-11 02:55 AM
Don't worry, I've got several younger siblings, several being justkids, and plan to have kids someday myself, and would never harm a kid, nor wish harm on a child.
Mature people can handle such topics responsibly, and certainly do not delight in them, but they may be useful for gameplay to evoke a certain emotional response - for example, if youwere amongst the players encountering the Sanguine Widowmaker, the response would be exactly as intended - to creep you out, get scared and certainly not trust that cursed piece of iron, even though it might state that its intentions are lily-white.

Perhaps there should be a box to check if a post is not suitable for audiences under a certain age, due to violence, or sexual content? Go to Comment
BRS Gwynith
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-12 10:44 AM
I'd velcome if she and her personality and quirks were portayed a little more in-depth, but good none-the-less. Go to Comment
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