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The Staff of Undoing
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-05 03:16 PM
Hm. The story is interesting. Can't say it's my cup of tea, but it's interesting.

The why and how of it isn't explained. Did this kid just will a weird stick to become a magic spear? And the magic properties are a little wordy in their explanation.

It's got potential, I reckon. But as is, it doesn't do much for me. Go to Comment
The Lost Marbles
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-05 03:33 PM
The item itself is a half-baked idea that needed some more time to develop and explore. But +.5 points for the entertaining thread discussion. Go to Comment
Glass Mountain
Locations  (Desert)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-26 11:25 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-22 08:01 AM
I echo MoonHunter's decrying the number of votes compared to the number of comments. When those young nomads who have but little skill or writing sense when they wander into our Citadel, we should encourage even their weak efforts and try to hone their skills, difficult as it may be. Who knows what potential talent was lost when someone's first submission gets a low vote and they leave without hope?

I'm as guilty as the rest, but I hope in the decade(!) since devblu posted this, we've gotten better as a writing community. Go to Comment
The Hellcoat
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-26 10:50 AM
This could be used as a weapon as well. Gift it to some uppity, fur-wearing noble you want done with. Go to Comment
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2016-05-24 08:05 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2016-05-18 11:19 AM
A usable sort of submission, but nothing super creative. A surprisingly disappointing submission from a mind as prolific as the Cap'n's. Go to Comment
Carpenter's Ring
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2016-11-21 11:44 AM
I want one. Go to Comment
The Tanglewood Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-04 07:00 AM
A fun twist on the Pandora's Box myth. Go to Comment
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An artist is commissioned to paint frescoes in a cathedral, and is imprisoned because of his unconventional style.

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