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Helen of Grond
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Chaosmark's comment on 2009-04-11 03:11 PM
I'm impressed with this one. It steps far outside the boundaries of stereotype, while at the same time retaining the entire feel of a fantasy princess. Well, one with tusks anyway. This is an entirely plausible character and story for any world where orcs are more than just brutish monsters. Go to Comment
Lokatt, God of Conflict
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Religious)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-12 05:35 PM
I'm honestly seeing this one as a GM's avatar, a personified deus ex machina. He has backstory and description, but no true purpose. I think this could use a bit more work. Go to Comment
Chaosmark's comment on 2009-03-01 05:53 PM
Barbarian Horde is our generic title for the nameless folks who don't want to take the time to register, but want to post a comment anyway. Feel free to copy your addition into a new comment, and click the scroll button instead of the submit comment button. Go to Comment
The Storm
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2009-01-31 06:57 PM
I'm imagining that it finally DOES breed, before anyone realizes what it is. It's not really searching for anything. It just wants food, territory, and to reproduce. Given a few months, these things could become a true threat to the stability of a world. Imagine the scenario after these storms have been reproducing for a few years. The earth is one massive storm front, people are living underground, because it's too dangerous up top. Creative post-apocalypse ftw. Go to Comment
A feeling that can't be Forgotten
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Players)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-11 06:57 PM
I agree, this isn't submission-worthy. Go to Comment
Panoply of Sorcery
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-05-10 01:30 PM
This is a good submission. Over time, it could become quite a useful thing. As of now, it could use a little fleshing out on the original submission, saying what sort of thing qualifies for inclusion. Minor tools and comfort items only, since those aren't worth full submissions?

Side-thought: if this is a scroll about items that aren't really worth making subs for, why is it a codex? Doesn't that defeat the purpose? Go to Comment
Panoply of Sorcery
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-05-10 02:28 PM

There are times when one needs to have a focus for spells, but the generic power of a staff isn't good enough, or the carrying of a staff is impractical. Regardless, there is a need for a specific tool that can act as a focuser for a specific range of spells. The benefit of this is twofold: power, and size.

1) Size - Size is always a consideration, especially for those of the adventurer-upon-return persuasion. The fact that this is a specialized tool allows the imprinting of a magical matrix on a smaller item. In addition, there are always times when you just can't take your staff in, and not always is it environmental. In such cases, a rod or wand of some sort finds itself quite concealable and easy to wield.

Quite obviously from the name, a wand or rod is going to be about a third of the size of a staff, tops. Remember, the point is portability. Most of these are hand-held items, maybe a foot or two in length.

2) Power - Thanks to the specialization of such a tool, the focusing capabilities are much stronger in a wand than they are in a general-purpose staff. This directly interplays with size considerations, since you can get the same or more bang for your buck with a wand instead of a staff.

In game terms, a wand or rod that has been imprinted with a magical matrix is bound to one school of magic (masters of the art may get more mileage, getting two or even three schools within a single item). This gives it double the bonuses of a generic staff when focusing spells of that school, but it cannot be used for spells outside of its specific school.

The main drawback to this sort of tool is that it's limited in scope. Barring Harry Potter-type worlds, where wands are the only real way to cast magic, a wand is always going to be much more limited in what it can do for you as a magical focus. This is the trade-off for the extra power you can get out of it. If you want versatility, you need to have an actual staff, or other generic focusing tool. Go to Comment
Nous Gamchigoth
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-05-10 02:55 PM
Woah. Just...Woah. I was expecting..I'm not sure what I was expecting, but it wasn't this! Gimme a day or so to sit on this one before voting. As a preliminary, the twist at the end is interesting. I'm not entirely sure how to roll with it, but no matter. It adds an air of eccentricity. Go to Comment
Yana the Dancer
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-12-08 12:09 AM
Your comment about being a hot dunshar made me snicker, and made me realize that this would be amusing to toss into a campaign with PCs that happen to have that level 17 bard ability. She might consider their advances anywhere along the line from amusing to revolting, with comic results. Not to mention frustrated PCs. And of course the scene, "We've always gotten the girl before..." "This one is a blob of goo that animates material and shapes it into a body to occupy." *various disturbing PC comments here* Go to Comment
Yana the Dancer
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-05-10 02:48 PM
I like this lass. The description of her is especially enchanting.

As a thought: since she prefers woods over mud and rock, will she be changing her material from softwoods, to harder and harder hardwoods? How do other dunshar view her progression? Will they find her to be a fragile, delicate beauty, or simply a less-advanced comrade? For some reason, I'm getting the feeling that she might epitomize the dunshar equivalent of the thin pale beauty that seems desirable by large numbers of today's populace. She's pretty, but some feel that she really just needs to fill out a bit more. Go to Comment
The Grey Skull
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-05-05 02:34 PM
You really do get into the supers genre. This is a unique villain. Good job, M. Go to Comment
Unique Gems
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-04-05 03:22 PM
What they said. :D Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-03-25 10:25 PM
This very well might get used in an upcoming session. I find this to be a very original form of undead, which will certainly blow minds and freak people out (because that's how it works). People tend to get scared of something they find to be unnatural, but that loses its edge after you see so many zombies, vampires, and general undead. Something like this is fresh, original, and definitely NOT the kind of 'natural' that the players are expecting! Good job, and keep up the posting! These are gems! Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-03-25 10:21 PM
I agree with it being vulnerable to fire, and not able to 'bounce off' charging cavalry. It would certainly shred them good though, and it'd take one heck of a rider to get his horse to charge into a mass of this stuff. So, it still provides solid defense, but if you get enough fanatics together (or undead, or elementals, or...), it probably won't hold for exceptionally long.

A good, solid submission. I like it, good job. Go to Comment
Collateral Damage Adventuring Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-30 04:56 PM
I'm not sure that this isn't ready for submission, assuming you add in some plot hooks for PC encounters. Go to Comment
Cult Generation
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-19 08:15 PM
It occurs to me that a number of these questions are perfect for designing a religion as well. The questions, while good, are a bit cut and dry though. Go to Comment
Unexpected Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Chaosmark's comment on 2009-02-03 09:53 PM
A simple folding fan
Small hand fans have been used for centuries. When the fan is composed of a sturdy material such as wood or bamboo, a warrior is never unarmed, even when he leaves his sword at the gate. The fan (folded, of course) can be used to strike an opponent in a variety of ways:
  • Sidestepping a rushing opponent and swinging the fan at their face. The opponent jerks their head back while their feet keep moving, resulting in them on the floor. Actually impacting the fan causes the same result, just with more pain for the attacker.
  • Alternately, the fan can simply be held point-first at a rushing attacker. The same result can be attained, or at minimum put the attacker off-guard enough to let you close for a grapple of some sort.
  • If trained and skilled enough, the fan can be used to strike various nerve centers in the arms, neck, and other places. Don't forget the eyes either.
Not all weapons need be made of steel or be bladed to be dangerous in the hands of someone competent. Go to Comment
Unexpected Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Chaosmark's comment on 2009-02-03 09:55 PM
Not sure why I haven't voted on this yet. Probably because it hadn't yet come into it's own when I first read it. Go to Comment
30 Cheeses
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-02-11 11:18 PM
Unique, and creative. Best of all, it's easy to plop down into any campaign world. A perfect 30! Go to Comment
Grue - The New Take
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Other)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-19 06:51 PM
Finish this. Classic geekdom demands it. Go to Comment
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