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The Eolian Reel

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Beware the Dance of Destruction!

The madcap minstrel Tyrall first performed this frenetic dance tune before the court of Duke Faenkund, a performance that literally brought down the house.  The minstrel’s unearthly music somehow called forth the frenzied tempest spirit Pavanus, which leveled the palace.  Hundreds died.

Since that disaster, arrogant bards and sorcerers have occasionally attempted the wild tune, believing they could tame the destructive storm spirit.  To date, all anyone has achieved is to rain destruction upon themselves.



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Wulfhere
April 20, 2007, 19:27
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The challenge I was given was to produce a complete submission, using 75 words or less. It comes to 75 words, not counting the summary or title.
Voted Murometz
April 20, 2007, 21:48
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It works! You get the what, when, how, and why, and even the after effects. Herein lies a legend and a challenge for a bard PC!

And since so many citadellians deride endless epics ;) well, here you go!

+.5 for challenge format.
Voted Cheka Man
April 20, 2007, 21:51
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Short but I like it.
CaptainPenguin
April 21, 2007, 12:52
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It has the mythical, legend-like qualities that I have always loved. This mythicalness, I think, is what fantasy is about; its about living in a world of legends.
Voted CaptainPenguin
April 21, 2007, 12:53
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Voted Dozus
April 21, 2007, 20:55
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Neat!
Voted Eclipse
April 22, 2007, 9:43
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Short sweet and to the point
Voted valadaar
April 22, 2007, 10:24
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Not bad.. :)

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