New Submissions
The Spies of Lindor were created in the province of Lindor approximately 200 years ago by a man named Kros Embron. It’s sole purpose was to gain information about a Resistance force against the kingdom brewing at the time. The Spies were victorious in a cover-up and complete destruction of this force, but then Kros was assassinated by his second in command and the group was split into two sections, which both remain today. The Espers of Lotrii (A city in Lindor) were created by the previous second-in-command and came to be near just as powerful as the Spies.
They have a very ‘hush-hush’ war, in which most people are killed in their sleep. They have become two very different societies and strategies. They fight all over the province of Lindor, and have yet to end the war there.
The Spies of Lindor have branched out, with their Headquarter’s remaining in Lindor. You never know if a Lindor may be recruiting, or causing harm, to your community or town. Watch out, for they may be near…
March 6, 2008, 21:25
March 6, 2008, 21:36
March 7, 2008, 2:53
This has definite potential, but it needs work.
March 7, 2008, 14:22
March 7, 2008, 20:13
March 10, 2008, 8:54
July 23, 2010, 16:09
July 27, 2010, 11:30
July 31, 2010, 21:56
August 24, 2010, 14:22
August 24, 2010, 21:36
1) Who was Kros Embron? Was he a King? An advisor to a King? A powerful merchant or simply a well connected and respected miscreant?
2) What was the resistance and how did it come about? What was the need to have someone look into it and destroy it later?
3) Where did the Spies of Lindor gain their training to become so adept at what they needed to do in such a short time?
4) If they were formed as information gatherers why does it seem that they became full fledged assassins in such short order?
5) Why was Kros killed by his second in command and why did the faction split into two, why not just stay under the command of Kros's killer?
6) Why the creation of the Espers of Lotrii? And where did their training in the assassin arts come from?
Not saying that this is a horrible sub by any means. It has a lot of potential I'm thinking but it definitely needs to be fleshed out more.
September 27, 2010, 8:22