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November 24, 2003, 1:52 pm
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Flask of Wiblië
By: elfkin

The flask itself is not very important, any flask will do.  It is the Wiblië itself wich is important.  This special drink carried by the rangers of Halefas is also a great need of other countries.  Merchants from around Hamset come to the great market street of Ellivanor in hope of ubtaining this liquid.

Wiblië comes from the elvish words ‘water from the sun’ for that is it’s closest discription.  This golden substance is not only pleasing to the eye but also an extremely delicious drink.   It was founded two years after the establishement of Ellivanor, after the trek from Uni-Mith while the elves were fleeing Vlames legions.  It was created by the alchaemist Dranor Quillmae.  Dranor’s people were being raided frequently form the Orcish colony of Vorgul, these were usually woarg riders.  Amonst the dead tere were still living though they died quickly as well.  Lord Valanair neede Dranor’s skills, to creat an elixir able to bring a living being from near death to perfect condition.  The exact ingredients of Wiblië are known only by Dranor and his closest colleagues who brew it now but upon it’s creation, Dranor took a sipp.  The moment the liquid touched his lips he was flooded with life and a tingling feeling.  He named it Wiblië for the golden liquid seemed like liquid sunlight.  Now, the famed rangers of Halefas carry it wherever they patrol and in steady supply.  Many merchands from all over Hamset come to perchase this magical elixir.  For a price of nine gold pieces(eighteen silver pieces or twenty-eight bronze coins) Thogh it seems expensive, this substance is worth it all. Found only in Halefas.

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The magic of Wiblië is to bring a living being from near death to full life.



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Agar
2003-11-24 04:35 PM
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Spell check, please.

Why did Dranor take a sip if he wasn't near death? Why is the exchange of broze to gold 3.111 bronze to 1 gold? Don't merchants find that inconvienant? How can Dranor and his coleagues keep the Halefas rangers in steady supply of this when merchants from all over Hamset want some too?
Strolen
2003-11-24 04:37 PM
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Great history and background on it, the thing that gets us, I believe is that "...famed rangers of Halefas carry it wherever they patrol and in steady supply." and the fact it brings people to full life.

Way too powerful and readily available and all it is is another healing potion. More like a video game potion of full health then really useable in a regular roleplaying game.
elfkin
2003-11-25 01:36 PM
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To Agar. I also said it was a delicious drink, and it musn't be to hard to make if it's in steady supply. Your right about the prices though, because of the danger of Undengrolk approaching, Vendors wish to upgrade their prices so they can get rich before the end.
Agar
2003-11-25 04:13 PM
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If it isn't hard to make, why do only Dranor and his closest colleagues know how to make it? It's nice to have a healing potion that isn't foul tasting, but this is still something I'd expect to see out of Final Fantasy.
elfkin
2003-11-26 01:38 PM
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I made it up my self!! how dare you acuse me of Playdgerism!! I said that Wiblië is easy to make,what I should have said was the ingredients do no take long to put together, or easy to prepare. I also said that it was also a dilicious drink, meaning not only is it a healing substance but also a drink at parties or something. Please try to understand that constant critisism doesn't help me in any way, are you able only to see the bad in my litterature? I thank Strolen for the compliments he gives, they inspire me to improve.
Agar
2003-11-27 02:57 AM
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Plagiarism. It's called plagiarism. You should look it up right after spell check.

I didn't accuse you of plagiarism any more than Strolen, I restated what he said.

You've explained that it can be easily made, but you haven't explained Why Dranor sipped some when he wasn't near death, your bad math from exchange rates, or why only Dranor and his closest colleagues know how to make it.

You only see my critisim as negative, even when I only repeat what others say, and choose not to adress it at all, so, I will bother you no further.
Pieh
2003-11-28 02:10 AM
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When did Agar accuse you of plagiarism? Im afraid i dont see that anywhere and wouldent mind an explanation.

But elfkin, seriously, I hope your not a GM. Either way I dont know what kind of people your playing with but I would think that a Full Heal potion would be greatly frowned upon by even the PCs if it was intoduced to a campain. But, to each his own...
CaptainPenguin
2003-11-30 08:31 PM
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Y'know what...
My hatred for this item burns so hot, I won't even begin, except to agree with what everyone else has said.
Roack
2005-07-28 07:11 AM
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Seconded.
It could use a major overhaul, specifically along the lines of avaliability. I'm pretty sure that Dranor took a sip to test its potentcy, after all it was immediately after he brewed it. It might make a little more sense for a servant to have done so, I mean, even if hes a master alchemist, there could have been major side-effects.
Voted Iain
2006-02-19 08:02 AM
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Why has this item been slated so much? Certainly, it has a couple of flaws - it is a bit overpowered and there are those issues with supply - but anyone can just tone those down a bit if they wish. True, it is just a healing potion but I would much rather put this in my game than the usual generic "Potion of Cure Light Wounds" brewed in their millions by nameless alchemists.

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