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November 30, 2007, 9:24 pm

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Aquurian Caravan Beetle


A gigantic insect, native to the arid badlands of northern Aquur, where fierce desert warriors roam the dunes, and the sand storms can flay a man to the bone in minutes.

A Caravan beetle is a giant insect, 30 to 40 foot in length, and 10 to 15 foot wide, resembling nothing so much as a massive woodlouse or elongated, clawless crab. Its flattish upper carapace seems to be made from grey, lumpy rock, a covering harder than the hardest fired ceramics, and it moves along on six stumpy, crab-like legs. The head is small, spade-like and nestled deep within a fold of the rock-like dorsal shield. The visible sensory organs consists of five stalked, facetted eyes and a retractable snout, not unlike that of a butterfly.

The intelligence of the Beetle is exceedingly low, making it easy to control for anyone with psionic Talent, but its bulk and protective cover keeps it safe from most of the fast-moving predators of the desert. The Beetle can go for months without water, and seems to subsist mostly on roots and certain types of rock it digs up from the sands.

This lumbering, stony behemoth, resembling nothing so much as a flattened, mobile pile of rock, has been harnessed by the nomads of this inhospitable region, to serve as their mobile base of operations as they migrate from oasis to oasis as the seasons dictate.

The Aquurian Nomads, the wind-bitten, hardened children of the desert, raise their pennon-bedecked goat-skin pavilions and house-sized tents atop the relatively level backs of these beasts. The flattish "platform" on the back of the creature will, when the Beetle is up and moving, be some 10 feet above the ground, keeping its riders safely away from the ripping thorns, giant antlion traps and poisonous spiders, scorpions and snakes that infest the desert.

The predators of the desert avoid the lumbering Beetles, and, for the nomads, there is the additional benefit of not having to break and raise their tents every night. The various bands of Nomads travel in long caravans across the arid wastes, but can remain in relative comfort and safety atop their slow-moving mounts.

The Nomads breed the Caravan Beetles like other people breed horses, striving for an even gait, large back area, controlability and great endurance. Different tribes, depending on their routes of migration and specific standards, strive for different traits, and it is common to see a caravan followed by a small herd of half-grown Beetles.

Author´s Notes

This is sort of a "spin off" from the Locastus setting I´m working on, in that there are no Caravan Beetles in Locastus itself (although there are a few Aquurian Nomads). I just liked the idea so much I had to make a write-up out of it. There will be an entry in the Races of Locastus codex soon detailing the Nomads themselves. Hope you´ll enjoy it!

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November 29, 2007, 19:21
Its a good idea, but I'm not sure how the nomads are any more protected against the elements while riding the beetle's back, which would be the primary issue in a desert notorious for its sandstorms. But then again, perhaps I am misunderstanding the use of the beetles.
November 29, 2007, 19:59
You are correct, of course. I guess their heavy leather tents and maybe a bit of magic takes care of the sandstorms and so on. I more envisioned them being safe from predators on top of what is essentially a big tank. I may have to put that in, though. Thanks!

Voted valadaar
November 29, 2007, 20:02
Not bad, but it seems a bit light. A good idea though and conjures a good visual. Puts me in mind of the Jawas and their Sandcrawlers...
Voted Scrasamax
November 30, 2007, 3:40
This sub put me in the mind of the Ohm, from Nausica of the Winds, and I can imagine the fuss that happens when one of these stony behemoths split's it's shell and extends massive wings to lumber off into the sky with all the grace of a boulder with wings.

I added wings in my version, even if there is no mention of the beasts being able to fly in the sub.
November 30, 2007, 8:37
Damn Scras! That comment alone now makes me want to use these...!
Voted Cheka Man
November 30, 2007, 10:12
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Voted Murometz
November 30, 2007, 11:26
Some subs impress me for their detail and minutae. Some, simply for the visual and spark of imagination. This is one of the latter ones. I can make up all the details I need, but the concept of behemoth desert beetles alone, makes me happy! Man, i love fanatsy bugs.

(Goat-Skin pavilions are nice too!) Me'thinks we need a few of these in Nesseraum.
November 30, 2007, 21:27
I´ve beefed this one up a bit. It makes a bit more sense me, at least...
Voted Michael Jotne Slayer
December 1, 2007, 11:22
Dead on and ready to be used. Easily modified to fit any fantasy desert setting. All in all a good solid post.
Voted Demagogue
December 2, 2007, 22:46
Much improved, good job on the added detail.
Voted epsilon
December 3, 2007, 18:53
Big bug beasties of the desert, neat!
June 26, 2012, 4:27
Biologist's note: If it feeds on roots, it wouldn't need snout but mandibles of some sort. :)
June 27, 2012, 15:53
You might be right, I´m no zoologist :) But hey, I´ve never seen any rootgrubbing animal with mandibles? Boars, tapirs and aardvarks have snouts, but they are mammals of course... I´´ve got an idea: maybe it needs the snout to get to deep moisture pockets in the sand?

Damn, this is five years old.. Where does the time go?

Voted OmegaDraco
June 26, 2012, 11:58
I want to armor them up and ride them into glorious battle. Fun idea!
June 27, 2012, 15:59
I actually wrote a little of that in a short story:) 6198
I think the inspiration was the Jawas and their Sandcrawlers, always loved those..


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