The Disgraced & Vanquished
She is the former heiress or countess of a ravaged land, now participating in the once-unthinkable and unimaginable. Often in history, when one group of people conquered another, as an exclamation point, the victors would force or sell the noble wives and daughters into slavery, particularly of the sexual variety. This was a final slap on the face for the vanquished.
Appearance
This brown eyed brown haired beauty still carries herself with the dignity of a Queen, when she is not being forced into sexual acts.
History/Background
When Queen Amber came to power, initially she was a popular queen and a great relief from the iron rule of Queen Yocasta.
However, in the short term she was unable to stop a wave of looting and lawlessness from breaking out, and one of those he lost out was a mage and jeweller, who created the Queens Bane, a piece of magical jewellery designed to turn female rulers into vile tyrants. Under its malign influence, she started to change into a paranoid tyrant as bad as the Queen she had replaced, until she was ordering executions for wholly imagined plots, and the courtiers were terrified of her.
Originally her rule was only going to be for five years, after which time she would abdicate voluntarily and allow the man who used to be Queen Yocastas Royal Chancellor to become the new King. However, he soon guessed that she had no intention of handing over power and would sooner or later arrest him and send him to face the headsmans axe. So he struck first. With a small group of officers he stormed the royal apartments and captured Queen Amber. In the old days the people would not have stood for this outrage, but so unpopular had Amber become, that very few tried to defend her.
Rather then send her to the axe, the new King of Vallermoore decided on an even more humiliating and longer lasting punishment for the deposed Queen. He told her that each night she was to become the sexual plaything of the courtiers. By day, whilst she was to be watched to make sure she did not escape from the palace which had become her prison, she would be treated well and would wear the clothes of a Countess.
But once the sun had sunk below the horizon, her clothes would be taken from her and she would have no choice but to go to the bed of whatever courtier wanted her and was willing to pay him for the purpose. They would not allowed to beat her up or scar her body, but she had to do whatever she was told sexually provided it was within the new rules.
She was outraged, but he told her that if she did not do what she was told, he would forcibly have her stripped naked and sold her to a brutal pimp who would beat her rebelliousness out of her, and then she would be forced to sell her body to the meanest of the common people. If on the other hand she did what she was told, she would not be beaten or tortured.
And so her destiny was to be used as a sex object for whatever courtier wanted her, no matter what his age, level of health or status. She hated doing it, but it was a lot better then the alternative of becoming a common whore.
A doctor was assigned to her to treat such things as minor scratches and bruises, rope burns and other such things that might happen during sex, to make sure she will be ready for another night of the same treatment.
The new king got great pleasure at seeing the once imperious Queen of two lands reduced to a fawning kitten. He taunted her and called her Amber, Queen of the Whores.
Recently, the Queen has come across a young courtier who is different from the rest and values her for her mind as well as for her body. She is attempting to win his love, in the hope that he will help her escape from the hell that her life has become, or at least ask the King for permission to end her punishment. Life as his wife, whilst not as good as being a Queen, would be a thousand times better then what she has been forced to do.
Special Equipment
None, all her things that might in any way allow her to escape her fate were taken from her, and by night she is not even allowed to wear any clothes.
Roleplaying Notes
When encountered by day, Amber carries herself with the noble bearing of a Queen, but the sadness is visible in her eyes. If questioned, she will be very reluctant to tell the PCs what has happened to her. Should the PCs start treating her with kindness, she will quickly become almost pathetically grateful, which will give all but the most obtuse PC a clue that something is wrong.
Humilated and traumatized by what she has been through, Amber would welcome any chance of escape, even if it meant becoming the loving girlfriend of a PC. She might get so desperate that she will offer the PCs her body if they will rescue her.
Plot hooks-The king offers the PCs a night to enjoy Amber as a sex slave. What do they do?
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Queen Yocasta
By: Cheka Man
( NPCs ) Campaign -
Political Queen Yocasta was until recently, the very capable if autocratic ruler of Valermoore, but recently, she has changed. She is allways seen with a young woman, always wearing a heavy veil and gloves, who never speaks or moves. She claims that she is her daughter,Princess Chrysta, but a faint noxious smell comes from the veiled woman…
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Special Equipment:
The Crown of Vallermoore (which will be added to the items section later.)
Appearance:
Queen Yocasta, even in her later years, has a trace of beauty about her. She wears her royal robes of scarlet & ermine and a light silver crown set with diamonds. Her eyes and hair are a dark brown.
She also has a veiled girl beside her that does not speak or move, stinks, and is in fact Princess Chrysta’s dead body. She carries her sceptre and wears her royal sword. She is imperious,bossy, and expects to be obeyed, and those who spend any amount of time with her will know how paranoid she has become.
Background:
Queen Yocasta did not grow up expecting to rule over the city state of Valermoore. When she was only seventeen her father, King Charles, was assassinated by an ambitious general at his court, who invited the king to speak with him alone, telling him that he knew of a plot against him, and then stabbed him to death with one quick blow. On a signal from him, the troops loyal to him stormed the Palace. The Queen was cut down as were several leading nobles, but the young and beautiful Princess Yocasta was only flung into the Royal Dungeon, as the general had plans to force her to marry him in a week when the dust from the coup had settled, so he could start a new Royal Dynasty.
Yocasta had other ideas. She used her beauty and what was then her sweet nature to start a secret romance with the young officer who was sent to watch her, and quickly seduced him. She stroked his ego, wondering why such a clever officer as him was only an army major, kissing and cuddling him, until his ego grew to massive proportions and he launched a counter-coup, freed her and killed the general. Her response was to poison him that very night with a potion that made it seem like he was dead. When he woke he found himself buried six feet under in a coffin. With nobody to hear his cries, he quickly choked to death from lack of oxygen.
Yocasta publicly mourned him,telling everyone he had died from a heart attack, and then ascended the throne as Queen of Valermoore. She quickly had a unit of guards assembled who were paid well and swore an oath of loyalty to her. In her early days she was quite a popular queen. Taxes were lowered and many political prisoners were set free. The army was kept busy to keep it out of politics.
First it annexed the city of Pier Point. There was very little bloodshed as many citizens were happy to become citizens of Valermoore. Then it and the army of Leith Noll marched on Karnivahl after serious problems involving taxes on river trade routes. The problem was settled without bloodshed. When it tried to annex Barrowtown things went badly wrong when a few soldiers tried to loot a royal barrow. The spirits of the kings and queens, the wights, rose up and slaughtered many in the army. Yocasta was able to put the blame on a few thieves.
She married a trusted courtier and had a child, Princess Chrysta. When the girl was seventeen she was caught having an affair with the court jester. Yocasta had the jester tortured to death and Chrysta committed suicide. This broke Yocasta who became a twisted image of what she had been. She refused to admit that Chrysta was dead, and her advisors tried to get other girls to take on the role of Chrysta. Those who failed in the role were quietly murdered.
As people began fleeing the capital en masse, Yocasta had her daughter’s dead body brought to her, and treated it as if it was alive. The people returned to the capital, but amongst her court Yocasta has begun to order executions and jailings for very tiny reasons. Almost all her court hate her, but her loyal guards, who are known as "Yocasta’s Eyes" make it very hard to assassinate her.
Roleplaying Notes:
Yocasta can be played as three different types depending on the time period. The young Yocasta is beautiful and seductive and might try and seduce a PC for some reason of her own. She is also cold and calculating and very ambitious.
As Queen when her daughter lived, she was a firm & no-nonsense type. Everybody knew what was allowed and what would get them into very serious and possibly fatal trouble. Because of this, only rarely did she have to order an execution. Think of her as a female Henry the Eighth type, but in the days when Henry was handsome and thin instead of bloated and fat. She is best as a secondary character getting the PC’s to carry out some top-secret task for her.
After her daughter died Yocasta became a half crazy, paranoid and evil tyrant. The PC’s could be trying to assassinate her (not an easy task) or it could be that a diplomat’s daughter has vanished and is being groomed as Princess Chrysta.
The PC’s will have to infiltrate the place. If they are all male then one will have to be dressed up as a girl to get into the secret Princess Training school, which could be interesting.
Only after her daughter died did Yocasta become totally evil. Before that, she is not exactly good, but she is good at her job of ruling well.
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January 28, 2009, 6:52
I´d suggest playing up the darker aspects and shunting the hot, kinky sex descriptions into the background a bit. I really think this sub needs to be a lot darker and unpleasant - as it is it´s just a tad too much high school wet dream.
My other tip would be that it is always better to merely suggest or allude to the horrible, degrading forms of sex this poor, enslaved woman is subjected to, rather than spelling it out with arrows and rings around the nasty parts. Let your readers dirty imagination fill in the details for you - I promise, that will make it worse than anything you can ever write. Making the reader´s mind do your job is an art, though, which very few have mastered - but it´s an excellent opportunity for you to practise.
Put in details like a physician employed solely to treat her bruises and bite marks, to be ready for another day of the same... etc, etc.
So, please don´t give up or think I´m a jerk for giving critisism - I think the idea is great and the imagery is good, it just needs a bit of work. It would be a shame if you left this rather promising idea!
Please let me know if you want to brainstorm!
/David
January 28, 2009, 13:07
Maybe more stuff like whats on her mind, escape plans, a bit more depth to a good tragic character, less oiled-body stuff? You over-focused on the sex part lol I actually think the idea of a queen in bondage is a good one. There is lots to build on for an adventure, embroiling the PCs.
January 29, 2009, 3:44
I´ll just recuperate for a few days, and then I´ll happily co-op with you on this, Cheka.
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January 29, 2009, 9:53
March 19, 2009, 5:58
I'd imagine that, despite all the humiliation, she might carry herself with a sense of grace and style which belies her current position as a sex toy. This might goad some of the courtiers, and particularly the king, to try to "push the envelope" with her, so to speak; in an attempt to put her in her place. Or, as one loutish oaf said before having a go; "She won't be standing so tall and proud when I'M done with 'er!" However, many other courtiers may be quite intimidated by her; realizing that, despite her current position, she is still a queen at heart. Many may have initially had a "go at" their previous queen, but found the experience to be rather guilt-ridden, unsatisfying, and not the least bit intimidating. Despite her apparent defenselesness, their former queen is still a quite formidable personality.
In addition to the desire to be free, she might also internally struggle with this; it takes all her will to maintain her dignity in the face of daily humiliations.
Perhaps she might be played in that the PCs initially aren't sure as to her position; "A tall, beautiful, and entirely naked woman greets you at the door. In a gentle curtsy, she bids you welcome to the inner court. As she leads you towards the throne room, she inquires of your journey; asking various questions about the surrounding lands." "Uhm, is this the queen or something? Did I hear you right; she is wandering around nekkid?"
March 19, 2009, 15:00
Good point about the dignity, though.
March 20, 2009, 13:22
March 20, 2009, 18:12
September 1, 2009, 12:46
September 2, 2009, 5:50
It´s an interesting (albeit nasty) portrait of humiliation and disgrace - the only thing I can think of that would make the humiliation complete is that she has started, despite herself, to actually *like* the abuse. But then I´ve always have had a nasty mind...
Good work, Cheka. This is one of your better subs!
//David
October 15, 2010, 8:26
So was it the bracelet or the demon crown that made her evil? Doesn't matter, I suppose when your character mirror mytho-historical figures the facts can kind of float. It would be an interesting challenge for the PCs, do they save the Queens dignity? Does she deserve this? Who the queen be once she is freed