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Setting Forge / Re: Sanctum - A World Beyond its Fate
« Last post by axlerowes on November 13, 2017, 09:50:31 PM »
This is as complete as many of the published worlds that people have tried to explain to me. This is pretty d**n complete, all you need is a map.
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Cosmic Pluralism / Re: Cosmic Era Progress Log
« Last post by Scrasamax on November 13, 2017, 04:09:53 PM »
I cant do this without coming across as pedantic, or belaboring the point, and I want everyone to be positive and happy
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Sagely Advice / Re: Magic Hating Knights
« Last post by EchoMirage on November 13, 2017, 02:24:18 PM »
11. Magic users are hard to control and reject the Baron's authority. The Baron hates that.
12. The Baron is evil, and the magic users are opposing him. He has misrepresented them as heretics or devil worshippers.
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Cosmic Pluralism / Re: Cosmic Era Progress Log
« Last post by Scrasamax on November 13, 2017, 06:53:02 AM »
So we should stop commenting on your citadel posts and wait for the finished product?

Not at all, you're feedback is valuable and important, I just want to put out there what sort of thing I'm putting out here at the Citadel so we can have feedback on the same level.

A lot of the things I'm putting out are technical manual entries, not so much fiction pieces. They also aren't going to any sort of print or publication so feedback on that level is not really the right thing. When we worked on the ezine that was the perfect level of feedback and a common goal of a finished product going to publication. Super happy about that by the way.

I've got an idea, about feedback, let me get back to you on that.

Thumbs up super positive this morning and I appreciate your interest and feedback
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Cosmic Pluralism / Re: Cosmic Era Progress Log
« Last post by axlerowes on November 12, 2017, 08:27:03 PM »
So we should stop commenting on your citadel posts and wait for the finished product?
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Cosmic Pluralism / Re: Cosmic Era Progress Log
« Last post by Scrasamax on November 12, 2017, 11:14:22 AM »
So, new fairly large submission up. Not the greatest or most enlightened piece of work. It superficially is a romp through GI Joe playsets, kickstarted by an article about s**tty GI Joe toys. I did the write up on the Cataphract from that, and then wandered into the HQ and other other sets via wiki wandering. It happens.

There is a process to this, and as I have mentioned to others before, the Citadel here is the staging area, the research and development part of my writing, and not the finished goods. This has been a point of some contention with other articles, especially noting tone and voice used in various pieces.

Several of the things that rolled though while writing are going to be edited/revised into the novel. There is a section where the protagonist and his cohort are going through the ruins of the Rust Belt and American hinterlands, where things like the fortress made from the superstructure of a navy ship are going to be found. In the current unrevised state, that chapter is just a maze of dull debris and improvised walls bulldozed into place.

So, these things, sometimes the playing yields useful things.

The best thing's I'll be pulling are the Elevated Superiority platforms, which are going to become the focal point of the protagonist's downtime at the home base, and the bandits running the ruins of a city from the bridge of a US navy cruiser dropped near the outskirts of the industrial part of a certain city I dislike. The WTFortress will also be making multiple appearances in different locals as a reminder of the past.

Thanks for reading.
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Fields of Challenge / Re: Freetext Friday
« Last post by Strolen on November 12, 2017, 08:16:33 AM »
You are a MACHINE Dragonlordmax!!!!
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Fields of Challenge / Re: Freetext Friday
« Last post by Dragonlordmax on November 10, 2017, 08:31:57 PM »
I note that while we have a superhero freetext, we don't have a supervillain freetext. So that's what we're going to do this week.
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Dwarven Guild / Re: Guild Matters--conversations with the council
« Last post by Strolen on November 09, 2017, 09:37:58 PM »


That was the first version I heard, a remix of course, but the one my son and I became addicted for a bit. Then we moved on to Guy on a Buffalo and Nature Walk (That's Neat).

But yes, that is why I became a dwarf.
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Dwarven Guild / Re: Guild Matters--conversations with the council
« Last post by axlerowes on November 09, 2017, 03:56:16 PM »
Listen to Diggy Diggy Hole....how can you not become a dwarf?
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