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Offline CalOfTyr

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Ishloon
« on: June 14, 2018, 12:54:23 AM »

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Ishloon, the only inhabitable planet with in a ten planet system, (none of the other planets have names, thinking the Deities.)  It has a spring, summer and a fall, winter is rare. The two moon, Mimo and Sa, occasionally throw the planet out of orbit.

Eight continents make up the planet Enatar, Mophac, Aeleyr ,Ty’nan, Adakax, Nazur, Za’ana, and Thinal.

Enatar is the most complete with seven countries Damil, the most complete country, (where my campaign is taking place,) Francil, Arelev, Crellaxup, Ad'Ves, Jisak, and Krellael. And is the only continent that is the The North.

Yes it does sound like Game of Thrones. It is loosely based around it but loosely.
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Re: Ishloon
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2018, 04:43:16 AM »
I'd perhaps say that the complex orbital mechanics of the two moons sometimes shift the planet into an excentric orbit, or that the planet in fact orbits slowly, think Heliconia. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Helliconia which in fact may be worth a read, if you wish to design a world that passes through long winter periods.
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Re: Ishloon
« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2018, 06:22:17 AM »
For the most part GoT is standard genre fantasy (a little low magic, and no Tolkeinism), so it is easy to grab. The question then becomes how is it different?

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Re: Ishloon
« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2018, 02:15:23 AM »
I will look into that.

Mimo is the smaller of the two moons, it also radiates magic. Where most magic comes (except Devine magics).

For plot purposes this is the 5th version of this world. There are 5 peices of creation that gives the welder the ability to transform the world as they see fit. (The campaign where these came into play was the latest one I ran... And they failed)

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Re: Ishloon
« Reply #4 on: June 18, 2018, 01:07:28 PM »
A few tips:
a) http://www.frathwiki.com/Dr._Zahir%27s_Ethnographical_Questionnaire may help you detail cultures, and the surroundings they exist in.
b) If you wish to get more input, we'll need more details to work off.
c) Spellchecking facilitates comprehension, and avoids a shift of the reader's attention from content to form.
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