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Offline mrcelophane

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NPC Work in Progress
« on: August 19, 2013, 12:32:20 AM »
http://strolen.com/viewing/Lady_Delores_Briggs

I'm not really stuck, I have a clear idea of where I want to go. Just about to go to bed and thought I would post what I had finished to see if what y'all thought.

I should have it completed in two days, assuming work does not get in the way.  :lol:
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Re: NPC Work in Progress
« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2013, 07:24:07 AM »
An intriguing character. I look forward to reading the rest.

I agree with your assessment about the Lady Briggs being more sinister than your original concept. She is also less stereotypical than your first version sounds. I like good villains that don't appear to be monsters on the outside.
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Re: NPC Work in Progress
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2013, 03:59:21 PM »
No longer in progress
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Re: NPC Work in Progress
« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2013, 02:08:34 AM »
You quit?


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