Enhancing/revising my older subs

[Silveressa]

Over the next few weeks I plan to go back and rework a few older subs of mine that looking back on, didn't quite live up to my, (and others) expectations.

I'll post back here with links after each one to keep things less cluttered and more easily point people in the right direction for a refresher/re-vote.

Feel free to post here or toss me a pm if you think any are in particular need of attention.

Enhanced Sub #1:

Kisanth, mage servant of Isis:

I gave Kisanth a quick overhaul and small expansion, hopefully it'll make it a bit easier to add her to a group, and her additional background should make her touch more memorable/interesting.

http://strolen.com/viewing/Kisanth_Mage_servant_of_Isis#76237

[Silveressa]

Sub removed for edit and overhaul:

True Fear

Yanked the piece down entirely for a full revision after Dossta kindly pointed out some glaring issues left over from its original incarnation 14 years ago that I'd forgotten all about. (It'll reappear in time, but not until it's fully ready for the publics eye.

Thanks for that btw Dossta, it saved me some major headaches!

[Strolen]

Commented on the first!

[Silveressa]

Enhanced Sub #2:

Descriptive combat

I added in a couple suggestions on how to encourage your group to make combat descriptive.

http://strolen.com/viewing/5491