Welcome, Isk! Don't worry, we don't bite! (...Except on special occasions and holidays.)
If your concerned about how a sub is coming out, you can put it into the "Advice Requested" section, then send PMs to the people whose advice you want. (Otherwse, it may sit there and collect dust: We're not always good at commenting on those subs.) If you didn't want advice from anyone in particular, put a comment in the "Shout Box" requesting input.
We like to dig up Strolen's and Captain Penguin's early subs just to watch them squirm, but actually, even subs that aren't classic literature can inspire great games.