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Offline axlerowes

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Re: The Royal Voting Exchange of Strolen's Citadel!!
« Reply #75 on: December 15, 2014, 08:02:34 PM »
Moonlake commented on your prologue.  It is so short! Almost like a back a cover piece.

Do you want votes on that stuff  as part or just once the book is done?

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Re: The Royal Voting Exchange of Strolen's Citadel!!
« Reply #76 on: December 16, 2014, 07:49:02 AM »
Aramax, I loved on your Queen Nekcrola, thought she was a lot of fun, really just bled old school. Thanks for drawing that out. 

Would you mind looking at my Cosmic Era mech post...

http://strolen.com/viewing/The_Martell_Griffin_and_the_8th_Plague_of_the_Lake_Superior

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Re: The Royal Voting Exchange of Strolen's Citadel!!
« Reply #77 on: December 16, 2014, 06:10:11 PM »
Moonlake commented on your prologue.  It is so short! Almost like a back a cover piece.

Do you want votes on that stuff  as part or just once the book is done?

Axle, whether you want to vote on each Chap or not I don't really care. It's really the comment that I want, esp. in response to aspects that I outline as separate ideas under each Chap but in general as well.

Any sub of yours you want me to read in return? If you don't have so short a sub, don't worry. I've decided to change the terms so that it's 2000 words per Chap incl. Prologue else it's getting too complicated.

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Re: The Royal Voting Exchange of Strolen's Citadel!!
« Reply #78 on: December 17, 2014, 12:00:27 PM »
Moonlake,  I will give your stuff a vote, but I think you should combine some of these chapters into a single unit.

Can you give my beardspider post a once over

http://strolen.com/viewing/Beardspiders


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Re: The Royal Voting Exchange of Strolen's Citadel!!
« Reply #79 on: December 17, 2014, 02:56:44 PM »
Done.
btw, I just had the idea yesterday that I will put up a Codex that all the Chapters link to but was too busy yesterday to get to making it. I will put it up today.
Thanks for your comments on the Prologue. They were really helpful.
« Last Edit: December 17, 2014, 03:21:31 PM by Moonlake »

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Re: The Royal Voting Exchange of Strolen's Citadel!!
« Reply #80 on: December 18, 2014, 09:59:08 PM »
Moonlake,  I will give your stuff a vote, but I think you should combine some of these chapters into a single unit.

Can you give my beardspider post a once over

http://strolen.com/viewing/Beardspiders


Put up a Codex titled Return of the White Deer that links to each of the existing Chapters put up on the Citadel. Currently giving the early Chapters another edit and already made one edit on the Prologue based on some of the feedback from Axle.

btw, there is still 9 spots left from leaving a comment on the Prologue of the White Deer in exchange for vote on 2000 max piece and full 10 spots for the other full Chapters of this book.

Links:
http://strolen.com/viewing/The_Return_of_the_White_Deer-_Prologue
http://strolen.com/viewing/The_Return_of_the_White_Deer-_Chapter_1
http://strolen.com/viewing/The_Return_of_the_White_Deer-_Chapter_2
http://strolen.com/viewing/The_Return_of_the_White_Deer-_Chapter_3
http://strolen.com/viewing/The_Return_of_the_White_Deer-_Chapter_4
« Last Edit: December 18, 2014, 10:01:38 PM by Moonlake »

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Re: The Royal Voting Exchange of Strolen's Citadel!!
« Reply #81 on: December 18, 2014, 10:01:21 PM »
btw, there is still 9 spots left from leaving a comment on the Prologue of the White Deer in exchange for vote on 2000 max piece and full 10 spots for the other full Chapters of this book.

Remove the word count limit and I'll happily take you up on the offer. ;)
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Re: The Royal Voting Exchange of Strolen's Citadel!!
« Reply #82 on: December 18, 2014, 10:12:43 PM »
Sil, I put up the word count limit because that's roughly how long each of my Chapter is but I won't be really be doing an actual word count on the piece you ask me to read. I'm happy to read anything that's reasonably sized from my eyeball test (I think anything up to 3000 is still an easy read for me) in comparison to one of my Chapters or you can always read multiple Chapters in exchange for a longer piece  :wink:.

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