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« on: June 03, 2004, 06:32:17 PM »
In a land of mystical wonders, there was magic and frightening creatures, both of good........and evil. One such spirit was a boy by the name of Kal, only of the age of twelve, but as evil as ever. He has an evil spirit and wish to death upon all. He has jet black hair and an unusual blood red eyes. His main enemy, who was annoying but not much of a threat, was a boy named Arok, he is the same age as Kal and has silver hair and golden eyes. As children they were friends, but became enemies as Kal grew evil. Kal has been experimenting with demons for years and finaly came up with a evil plan...

  "It will be magnificent!" Kal shouted as he opened one of many purple pods in this deep laboratory underground. Out spilled ten large leathery egg-like things. Suddenly someone burst into the room.
  "You can't do this Kal!" the intruder yelled. Kal turned quickly and saw it was his ex-friend Arok.
   "Leave if you value your life, Arok," he said and took a vile of green liquid from a cabinet filled with the same type of viles.
  "I can't let you kill people!" Arok shouted at Kal, hoping to stop him.
  Kal replied,"Well I will, and you'll be the first!" And at that Kal poured the liquid on the egg and a red leech like creature squirmed out of the egg. Kal backed away and instantly the leech started to grow. It formed legs and arms and didn't stop until it was a huge red demon with ten eyes without pupils.
  "An army of these oughta do the trick," Kal said and laughed as the demon pounced at Arok, fangs bared.

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« Reply #1 on: June 06, 2004, 12:55:25 PM »
OOC:Will someone please reply?

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« Reply #2 on: June 06, 2004, 11:32:23 PM »
I think the problem is that you haven't given anyone a chance to create or introduce a character. Try increasing your setting and letting us figure out how we can make a character to fit into your world. At the moment you've just got two guys in an -assumedly- hidden lair, and a demon. It doesn't give anyone else an opening to join in.
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« Reply #3 on: June 07, 2004, 03:31:06 PM »
Not again. After five hundred years, another person was messing with the "Thade" eggs. Well so it would be. After fully awakening from his five hundred year rest, Asheel, a necromancer, rose from his own death, and began to bring his minions to life. Sometimes the only way to combat the darkness was with darkness. Now, using his abilities to track souls through space and time, Asheel would track down this would-be summoner, and defeat him.
Rock may break, Ice may melt, and Fire may suffocate, but in the end Darkness consumes all, and so, it shall consume You.

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« Reply #4 on: June 07, 2004, 07:28:20 PM »
The demon landed with a thud, and Arok was desperatly trying to hold back it's snarling jaws.
  " This will be entertaining," said Kals, wathcing Arok fight to hold back his demon, but bad news for Arok, Arok was losing. The demon finally pushed with all its might and with a crack, it broke Arok's arm. Falling from pain and the demon's force, Arok fell to the ground. He grabbed his limp arm.
  "Don't worry," remarked Kals, "the pain won't last long." And then, almost on cue, the demon was on him. Arok stared in horror as the space between Arok's head and the demon's jaws grew smaller...

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« Reply #5 on: June 08, 2004, 09:15:12 AM »
OOC: I need a Setting. Day/night, Technological era. Mountain village, Suburban area, country, City, Outside a city. what? give me a setting. Not just "a cave someplace".

IC: Kals Mother walked in the door. "Honey, i think that you havebeen spending way too much AAAHH" she screamed as  she saw the sight before her.

OOC: I am just buying time for Kals since that seems to be what you want to happen, but Shadowkin is right, there is not much of a chance for characters to enter.
Rock may break, Ice may melt, and Fire may suffocate, but in the end Darkness consumes all, and so, it shall consume You.

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« Reply #6 on: June 08, 2004, 02:24:25 PM »
OOC:The cave is in a lush green valley on a small farm, which is Kals's home.It is broad daylite.

IC:Arok  struggled with his unbroken arm and pushed against the demon's snout. Kals looked up, "Didn't you always know I was evil? Or are just stupid? Anyway, leave if you wish to live longer," he said to his mother then returned to watching Arok's struggle.

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« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2004, 07:31:27 AM »
Asheel was now outside and on a horse that he had risen himself. The horse was not simply undead, but possesed by a great spirit. It could run long distances without tiring, and do far more than that. His two Gaurds, Thanatos and Yama, sat on horses of their own.

In moments they were riding full speed towards the Ka Rul mountains. Still many leagues away, but Asheel would make fast time. He always did.

OOC: you might want to play a couple of rounds because my character has some ground to cover first. he probably will not get there until nightfall...which is how he likes it.
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« Reply #8 on: June 09, 2004, 04:34:19 PM »
As Arok struggled, Kals smiled. "As soon as this annoyance is out of the way, I awaken the rest," Kals said then laughed.

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« Reply #9 on: June 11, 2004, 01:28:46 AM »
The mother, having left a few minutes ago, ran to get help from anybody in the area. there just happened to be a small celebration going on in the town which was not far off. If she could warn the village in time, maybe she could stop her son from doing the unthinkable. She rode now at full speed on horseback to get there.

Meanwhile, at the town, the celebration was yet to commence. People from all around had come, including many that nobody in the area had ever seen before. The celebration was about to take place They had brought in fireworks and folksmen and all sorts of things for the celebration. And with all the new travelers there, certainly there would be plenty of life at the party.

...Meanwhile, Asheel rode at a fast pace in search of his target. It would still be some time, but the sun was not too far from setting, and would leave the world in darkness soon. He only hoped that he would have more to choose from than skeletons in the graveyard. However, if He did not get there in time, he would have plenty of newly dead to choose from.

OOC: If any other characters wish to join, this is the moment. all you have to do is be in the town when Kal's mother arrives. Make something up about being in the bar, or the town center.
Rock may break, Ice may melt, and Fire may suffocate, but in the end Darkness consumes all, and so, it shall consume You.

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« Reply #10 on: June 24, 2004, 08:20:41 AM »
"This is taking too long," Kals muttered and grabbed two more eggs and two more viles of liquid. He poured the liquid on and the same thing happened with these two eggs as what had happened to the other one. In a few moments there were two more of the same type of demons standing in the room.