1. Please comment and vote
2. Seriously, please comment and vote3. Don't be a d!ck about it
Criticism can be a very powerful and valuable tool if you understand how to give it, and more importantly, how to accept it.
A stylistic writing challenge
Actually a real-world fungus, just heard about it. A fungus that tastes well and all, no ill effects. UNLESS you consume some beverage, even 3 (three) days after eating it. Then you become really sick, pains, vomiting, all the fancy stuff. Was really used to cure alcoholism. May be a joke or to make sure the heroes spend their time focused on the mission.