I will give a full review and vote later. However, suffice it to say that I like it. Go to Comment

Solid and nicely done, might have do a piece of my own on metal inks... Go to Comment

This would be very useful for a rainmaker when the rains have failed for far too long. Go to Comment

I am giving my vote for the completness of the history and the way it was offered. Well written and easy to understand.

I voted 3.5/5 for the submission.
I fail to see the use of the item other than creating a rain storm. Not really in the chaotic nature of the concept of the shards have been. However, the fact that it unhinges the mind of those who read it makes me assume that this is the chaos in which the item brings. I had hoped for more. The history is very good and that above all else has given me the choice to make this a 4/5 instead of a 3.5/5.

I don't feel moved by this like I have by some of the earlier shard submissions. Don't get me wrong it is real good but it doesn't jump out at me and scream shards. I like the use that the shards are transfered into something else other than an item but an ink. Very nice touch. Go to Comment

Excellent work. I like how you involved so many aspects of the Shards: the Storm Queen, the Desert of Divine Despair, the Shards themselves. Well done. Go to Comment

Not bad! Go to Comment